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• I'm Not Sure If This Matters

  (#) AshleyChaotic 2006-10-06

  So I was going to read this earlier, but I got distracted. It's amazing-er, than anything I've ever read. But you've probably heard this more than anything and it's all just repetitive and pretty much dead. This chapter somewhat makes my life happy, that someone is happy, even if it's just in a story. Since the world just seems to be falling apart for everyone. I dunno. It's the way the words flow naturally that make me keep focused. It's not over written and makes me have to read things over, cause I really really hate that, and I lose interest fast if I have to do that. I think you know exactly what I mean. Even if you don't do perfect, your writing comes close. And I know I'm not the only one who believes this (100 plus reviews, DAYUM woman). So just keep on writin', keep on dreamin'. Cause Mz. C (although it's retired now) Will always read. Whoaa.
  
  Damn you and Travi. -is totally jealous-

• I'm Not Sure If This Matters

  (#) AshleyChaotic 2006-10-06

  Let me rephrase a part
  It makes me NOT have to re-read it again.
  I'm delrious.

• I'm Not Sure If This Matters

  (#) SZSmith 2006-10-06

  HOLY MOSES TEH LAST LINE ALWAYS GETS ME. I could've read this earlier but i was youtubing and all. Anywho, this was a cute chapter. Your writing had improved again, it's amazing. Let me go back and find some on my favorite parts....
  
  "My breathing was shallow and the only sound that was coming in was the light pitter-patter of the sprinkling rain drops, those mid-summer ones, you know?"
  
  the imagry in that was beyond anything you've written before. It has depth and meaning, and gets you into the characters mind almost.
  
  ""Can we be perfect now?" I asked and Patrick shook his head.
  
  "No," I frowned slightly and creased my eyebrows together.
  
  "Why?" I asked and he smirked to himself.
  
  "Because we can only get amazinger from here on out," "
  
  well obviously that would be a favorite line. It's priceless and beautiful. End.
  
  Well basically, I love this story will all my heart plus the universe and beyong etc. etc. you know the drill. wellll i must go sleep or my dad might just stab me. okay, bai!

• I'm Not Sure If This Matters

  (#) duckapple 2006-10-06

  Okay. So making this a paragraph. Are we talking Junior high, five sentence or MLA eight sentence? Either way all that matters is that I pretty much adore you J'adore mon amie Evie! See, I even love you in French.

• I'm Not Sure If This Matters

  (#) patrickdance4me 2006-10-07

  AHHHHHH!!!! I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY IT IS AWESOME AND MAKES ME ALL EXCITED AND WARM INSIDE AND I DONT REALLY WRITE IN PARAGRAPHS BUT THIS WILL BE LONG AND.... oh shit sorry i hit caps lock hehe. but um...yeah this kicks ass and should keep on kicking ass for a hundred chapters because if it ends i will cry unless there is a sequel because then i will be happy. i suck at writing reviews... hehe. but um... yeah. patrick rocks. he so cute i love his smile! and ok is this long enough because i dunno how long a paragraph is but this is prety long but i will keep on writing if you want me to because this story is fucking awesome and rocks harder than... um... rock? haha i suck at doing metaphors too. ok i'm done i love it and please write more :)

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