Archie and Theresa are left to deal with the deaths of their teammates, more specificaly Atlanta and Jay. To do this they must learn just what keot them from dieing along with their friends and lov...
(#) Parker 2006-10-07 08:28:26 PM
can't wait for next chappie
(#) XInfernoX 2006-10-07 08:56:19 PM
Poor Theresa and Archie...
My eyes are a bit (Just a bit mind you!) wet.
Update soon or else... or else...
(#) TORCH 2006-10-07 09:05:13 PM
Wow that was sad.
but anyway update soon.
(#) angelface 2006-10-07 09:24:29 PM
omg...i am almost crying...ok i AM crying...poor, well, everyone! poor archie, poor theresa, poor jay, atlanta, herry, odie, and neil, and poor janelle and jason for not having a dad...wahh! sniff sniff. but good story! keep it up it sounds so cool
is this a sequel to Where we Belong??
anyways.. its good
update soon plz
(#) nicki 2006-10-07 09:51:19 PM
omg omg omg im crying
that was soo moving and so passionate please make more i cant wait you are very talented
wow, that was so sad yet so godd... :'( they all died except for Theresa and Archie. I really have no clue what this story is gonna be about EXACTLY, but I don't care cuz i know it's gonna be soooo good! its one of my favs. already lol!
That was so sad, you had me on the verge of tears there, sniff, please update as soon as humanly or inhumany possible!
(#) Loretta 2006-10-08 06:40:06 AM
Wow, awesome beginning! Is this the sequel to Where We Belong? Please update soon!
(#) iheartyou07 2006-10-08 08:22:54 AM
awww, that was soo sad. I'm basically on the verge of crying. Glad to see a sequel though, it sounds like it's going to be amazing. UPDATE SOON!