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Prologe

Four young people, Arya, James, Dameon, and Cassandra didn't see it coming. The elements have always been attracted to them, but they didnt expect this. The sixth silver singer has come to them as...

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/10/10 - Updated: 2006/10/11 - 427 words

Reviews

• Kingdom of the Elements

  (#) Adim 2006-10-11 05:29:47 PM

  ya its me Luna Lovegood the auther, it says by Reko, but Rekos letting me use this account (thank u Reko)
  so i really want some critisism, i want to no what u do and do not like, i will update tomorrow if u can

  Author's response

  will do in the next chapet
  they have to telll Persaya about themselves

• Kingdom of the Elements

  (#) Reko 2006-10-12 06:25:13 PM

  THIS IS THE REAL REKO!!!!!!!!:P
  
  That was Really good Luna! I loved it... you've inproved a great deal! Keep going! Don't give up on this one!

• Kingdom of the Elements

  (#) Mr.Tortue 2006-10-13 01:00:58 PM

  You need to explain your characters more..i have no clue who these people are and you should also add how they met.
  you wanted critism!

  Author's response

  Will do, and by the way, I like your story to.

• Kingdom of the Elements

  (#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14 01:10:54 PM

  nice, this is really good. Keep it up

  Author's response

  Thanx, im glad you enjoyed it.
  I will be updating tomorrow. :)

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