Four young people, Arya, James, Dameon, and Cassandra didn't see it coming. The elements have always been attracted to them, but they didnt expect this. The sixth silver singer has come to them as...
(#) Adim 2006-10-11 05:29:47 PM
ya its me Luna Lovegood the auther, it says by Reko, but Rekos letting me use this account (thank u Reko)
so i really want some critisism, i want to no what u do and do not like, i will update tomorrow if u can
will do in the next chapet
they have to telll Persaya about themselves
(#) Reko 2006-10-12 06:25:13 PM
THIS IS THE REAL REKO!!!!!!!!:P
That was Really good Luna! I loved it... you've inproved a great deal! Keep going! Don't give up on this one!
(#) Mr.Tortue 2006-10-13 01:00:58 PM
You need to explain your characters more..i have no clue who these people are and you should also add how they met.
you wanted critism!
Will do, and by the way, I like your story to.
(#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14 01:10:54 PM
nice, this is really good. Keep it up
Thanx, im glad you enjoyed it.
I will be updating tomorrow. :)