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The Fire Burns Red
17 ReviewsShe felt her vision start to get blurry, but she held on anyways. This was it. This was the end. This would be when they all lost together or won together. Where all their paths came to a halt at t...
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The Fire Burns Red
(#) Loretta 2006-10-16 06:25:25 AM
That was very good, no it was excellent! It was also very sad. When I was reading I had tears threatening to cascade down my cheeks too. Please write a sequel!Author's response
aww, thanks you. Sorry I almost made you cry! Yes, I am writting a sequel becuase I feel horrible for what I did!!! -
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(#) RavenChild 2006-10-16 09:01:37 AM
This actually is a good start...you should defiantly do an 'aftermath' series of chapters to see how the survivers deal with the loss of their friends.Author's response
Yeah, I think I'll have the sequel where they kind of have to deal with it for a while, until they can figure out how to bring them back. Thanks for the review!! -
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(#) Jasmine_1 2006-10-16 11:30:28 AM
This is a lovely, sad story. Well, sad isnt even skimming the surface I'd say! PLEASE write a sequel. But please don't take away any of the sorrow in this please. Sometimes, when I need to cry I turn to stories like these... although if there WAS a sequel, it'd be great relief after crying : >Author's response
thank you! Reviews like yours means alot when I know people actually like it/it helps them in a way. I'm working on the sequel right now, and I assure you it's as sad as this one. lol. Thanks again! -
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(#) Pretty Gal 2006-10-16 11:57:11 PM
OMG... although that was SO sad I totally loved it! It was so... moving! You really are an awesome writer!!! PLEASE add more chapters or/and a sequel! PLEASE!!! Oh... and if you do could you please add some J/T fluff! Thanks! :-) lol!Author's response
aww, thank you! Yeah, I have the sequel up already, two chapters actually, and the third is currently being beta-read.. glad you liked it, and thanks!! -
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(#) angelface 2006-10-29 05:09:23 PM
im just responding to hachoo, i think jay is sorta hot, but not as cute as Archie-kins! -
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(#) Hellee 2006-11-12 11:39:31 PM
That was really sad, i liked the way you wrote it and it was easy to understand. keep up the great work -
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(#) lol 2006-11-14 06:10:09 PM
Wow. My EYES burn red. Whoa. Amazingly sad. My magic music keeps me from crying. Use it to bring back them all. PWEEEEEEZE? Worthless. You already made the sequel. :P Shit. Barbie song. Kill Barbie. Stupid accent. Random.