She felt her vision start to get blurry, but she held on anyways. This was it. This was the end. This would be when they all lost together or won together. Where all their paths came to a halt at t...
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-10-15 01:25:07 PMThat was...well I can't scold you for killing people...look at my storys. But this was really really good!!! I would be crying, except I'm doing a science project with a really hot guy from my class and he thinks I'm typing up our report...well I am but I just got destracted. It was a very good story!!!
Author's responselmao. Sounds like you're having a fun science project! lol, yeah, procrastination is the best. Thanks for the review! Oh, and they won't stay dead, hehe.
- This story almost sounds like mind, with them dieing and all,
I know a lot of stories are based on them defeating Cornus and some of them dieing,
but something about this story reminded me of my own,
or maybe not maybe I'm just being werid like always. Sad, very sad but very good,
the writing style reminds me of my friend,
Ok that was random,
The saddest stories are often the best, and it shows in this story,
I don't think you should add to it, it's fine as it is and it wouldn't have the same emotionel value if it was continued. Keep writing I love your stories.
Author's responseoops, sorry if it sounds like yours, but honestly, I didn't think of anyone else's story while I was writting it... thanks for the review, glad you like my stories! That means alot hugs You're right about the emotional value thing... hm, not sure if I'll continue it then.. we'll see. Well, thanks again!!!
(#) Freakanescence 2006-10-15 01:41:33 PMWoah, intense. I really like it, even though you killed most of them. Nice job!
Author's responselol. yeah I fell kind of bad for killing them off like that. Oops, guess I have an evil side in me, hehe. thanks for the review, I appreciate your feedback!
(#) story_master 2006-10-15 01:43:08 PMthat was really sad. But I liked it. I hope you do write more chapters or a sequel. This is definetly a favourite.:) And when you think about if they were to fight Cronus to the end it probably would end up the way you wrote, with only a few survivors. keep up the awsome work.^_^
Author's responseaww, thanks. I'm still debating whether or not to continue it... anyways, thanks for the awesome review!
(#) Always A Legend 2006-10-15 02:58:50 PMYOU BIG MEANIE!! lol, sry.. it's realt tear-jerker. i'm actually crying right now. YEH BRING THEM BACK!!!
Author's responselol, i dont want to be a big meanie, lol. aww, sorry I made you cry. K, working on the sequel/brining them back right now!! thanks for the review!
- wowi have never seen a story so moving yet so gory
a good piece of writing
Author's responsethanks! lol, I've never written something gory, and I hate it when they die, but I'll probably have a sequel were they come back working on it... Thanks again!!
(#) hachoo 2006-10-16 03:31:57 AMhey, that was really sad, but i liked it. please do a sequel to bring them back! it was really good... very emotional.
Author's responselol, thank you! Like I said, I'm working on the sequel right now, I feel really bad for killing them off like that.