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Steal My Soul

This is a challenge that I have taken up from Edwards Boots. The pairing, in short, is Lust/Greed, and the title is from a friend of mine who is known as Crimson Angel! So please read!

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: Greed, Lust - Published: 2005/07/07 - Updated: 2005/07/08 - 483 words - Complete

Reviews

• Steal My Soul

  (#) CrimsonAngel 2005-07-10 11:48:45 PM

  Coolio! thinks You know...I've never read a Lust/Greed fanfic before yours...and I must say....erm...type, that there should be more of them! smile;peace sign Coolness, eh? waves hand Anyways, keep it up chick-a---um...keep it up chick! smiles May you have the best of luck with your writing!

  Author's response

  grins It was thanks to you that this fic was even made. Without your quote it would've been nameless and most likely a crappy fic. So thanks for the review and the quote.

• Steal My Soul

  (#) sheepy 2005-07-17 04:14:35 PM

  You've got some excellent ideas about what a Lust/Greed relationship would be like. I've thought for a long time that those two would be really fascinating together because of their natures--it's always nice to see someone write the pairing. ^_^
  
  Could I offer some advice, though? This story mostly tells flat-out what their relationship is like. It's good to be clear in a story, but I think it would draw the reader in more if the story told less and showed more, by describing their actions, conversations, and thoughts.

  Author's response

  Hm...you do have a point. Maybe I should write another story like this with a little less talk and a lot more action. grins Thanks for the helpful review.

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