Days passed and tomorrow's turned into the next day, and the day after that. Suddenly they had realized that the world was saved and the clock had been ticking away. Five years of habit took its to...
That was really sad. Oh god, now I'm crying! Stupid Jay and having to do everything right! It was just beautiful, I loved it!
(#) Loretta 2006-10-18 07:35:28 AM
That was so sad, but really good and well written. Just reading it made me cry. Very well done!
(#) skittles 2006-10-18 11:30:08 AM
omg i lovee it is is soo sad
aww man now im crying :( :(
poor teresa and jay is so mean
please update as soon as yu can
(#) greektitan 2006-10-18 01:58:12 PM
JAY U IMBASSIL HOW COULD U U RETARD that was an awsome story(Sniff)It made near the end,anyways update soon!:'(
(#) iheartyou07 2006-10-18 02:39:08 PM
awww. I'm crying right now, it was soo sad. How could he do that to Theresa? Screw Amelia, lol. He's meant to be with Theresa! Aww, I'm still crying! That was amazing, I loved it and it's definitely a favorite! Please keep writing more!
(#) angelface 2006-10-18 04:16:21 PM
its funny, i SHOULD feel like killing you right now, but i dont. im not angry, im sad. it was very touching and i am ALMOST crying(i dont cry easily) i liked how you made it so that people no that dreams dont always come true and not even the nicest people always get a happily ever after. i also love how you fit the song in. VERY well done. (shit, now i AM crying)
yet again another amazing story. It was so sad, but I still really liked it. It's definetly one of my favourites. Your writing has once again astounded me and left me speechless. Awsome job. Keep it up:)
And sometimes meant to be, really isn't meant to be. Hehe Sorry I had to put that. This well it was truly beautiful and amazing. I loved it, and am crying slightly. Very very moving.
(#) Always_A_Legend 2006-10-18 07:37:52 PM
omg, omg. everybody is crying or almost (i'm crying too, wahh!) as this has already been mentioned: STUPID STUPID JAY!! YOU GOTTA BE THE MOST IDIOTIC PERSON IN THE WHOLE ENTIRE WORLD!! awesome story btw