A deeper look into the Stumph family.
my pants went unharmed!
Author's responseyea. i should add a disclaimer to that chapter stating i will not pay for laundry soap, drycleaning, et cetera...
(#) youngandreckless 2006-10-18 05:45:26 PMwhy regretting them?? there written beautifully. love this chapter. update again soon. please. xoxo -- Laura
Author's responsei spent so much time writting the first 5 chapters, and i had almost 25 pages of stuff written. What you are reading was a highly editted version of that, and i used the "cut and paste" method way too much. i posted the first five chapters because i'm way too impulsive, and i just wanted someone to read my stuff. with the last two chapters i've just sat, wrote, and posted. they happen to be my favs.
sorry about the life story. kind of.
(#) Phantom 2006-10-18 06:20:29 PMoo. I got a mention.
I love it.
I'm like crying.
I neeed more.
Author's responsei need reviews almost as much as nicotine and caffeine. even just a "hey, i read it".
remember, i'm fairly new at this. any complaints or compliments are greatly appreciated.
and thanks for still reading. oh, and you don't have a profile? what's up with that?
- I think the story is GRRREEEAAAT! In the words of Tony the Tiger of course. I also love the reference to the "sell out Jewel." Too true. Your chapters and choice of words are wonderful. There is no need for regret.
Author's responsethe flattery is going to my head.
don't you hate when you listen to a record and it helps you get through a rough spot in your life, and then a couple years later you try to reincorporate it into another rough spot and the artist has either a.) starting making soft drinks or b.) made of complete fool of themselves by dating a douchebag or becoming a total drug addict/alcoholic.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-10-19 01:24:41 AMI wish I had someone to pick out my clothes in the morning. I wouldn´t mind if it was Patrick either. (But no David Bowie shirts, please...) No regrets, just keep going. Even if you did post something that puts you in a difficult situation to continue your plot line now, one can always amend. Acy chapter. :)
Author's responseif patrick were a stylist hollywood would be a lot sweeter, just becuase you would never match and no one would ever truely be in style.
i'm desperately trying to find time to write the next chapter, and i'm halfway through. i'll be posting friday.
(#) whatkatydid 2006-10-19 08:36:46 AMYes I would like to submit a review - Keep writing or I'll wrap my wireless mouse wire around your neck and choke you!
Author's responsewell i can't argue with that. the threats kinda inspire me. i'm a sadist, though.
- Its good. Very good.
Pot roast, ye?
Author's responsei have no wit left in my fingers, but thanks for reading. pot roast is a go... for sure.
- Ahhh, you make me so mad that you can write so freakin good and I barley dish out rational crap.
I love this story past death.
Even though I'm a bit lost with all these characters, and who's slept with who, and who has a past worth hiding.
Trying to keep up...my tiny brain is working overtime, so stop the silent mocking.
I'm a not-so-delicate soul.
And this story is da shit.
Author's responsethis story loves you past death. and don't worry, the more you read the more you'll understand the characters. at least that was my plan :) ...and if you have any specific questions, just IM me or leave it in the reviews. i'll answer, i promise