Categories > Original > Poetry
Sound Full
1 ReviewsI.. Dont really know why I'm posting this. It's a poem/ song I guess, but I'm not really good at this type of... sharing? *Blush* Review please : >
Hmm... Writing for fun again, so please don't laugh Blush I actually write a lot of this stuff now, you know, getting inspired and just writing down a story in the form of a poem or song. I constantly listen to the stories in songs, and sometimes can't help but write one too! Sometimes I think I'm obsessive with music. I just listen to the lyrics until I know them off by heart and think on them. Then I just focus on the bass or guitar, listening to all the chords or beats on the drums. My favorite past time besides reading all these wonderful people's stories : > Review please. And the grammar is wrong on purpose, like when someone writes ain't on purpose? Yeah I'm a loser. And I'm completely sorry if this sounds like anything you've ever heard! If it does then I'll delete it right away! Anyone have a better title, I'm all ears.
-----------------------------------
No, I don't wanna fade
I wanna burst into black
Don't want to be saved
Listen to beats as you all turn your backs
Turn up the bass
This is gonna sound full
Soften the drums
The guitar needs to pull
No dreams of stars
I see them for my eyes
See them differently
Feel them swirl and collide
You turn and say 'You don't even know'
But I know
and you don't understand
This isn't for show
No I don't wanna fade
I wanna burst into black
Don't want to be saved
I daydream as you all turn your backs
I cry out again
The words just don't flow
My frustration is peaked
'Just don't let it show'
Adrenaline's pumped
Needed to borrow his heart
Keep me from dying
Didn't want it to part
Then you turn and say 'You don't even know'
But I know
And you don't want to throw this away
These nights when
All we did was dream
Music, content in our hearts
Stars bright, perfect it had seemed
And we hadn't cared
But this is important
It's perfection is key
It needs to relay to him
If only to make him see
I could die without it
I need to borrow his heart
But this time is different
It doesn't need to part
Turn up the bass
This is gonna sound full
Soften the drums
The guitar needs to pull
I don't dream of stars
I see them in your eyes
Feelings that swell
They swirl and collide
You turn and say 'You don't even know'
But I know
how you feel and
I hope that it shows
-----------------------------------
For anyone who doesn't understand, this is about a carefree, kind of immature girl who finds that she loves this guy. He's kind of serious, but great in almost every way. She's so infatuated with him that she just goes ahead and tells him, only to be crushed when he becomes flustered and a little bit angry with her. They were great friends and so she tries to communicate with him through music, trying to make everything perfect, blocking out everything while attempting to. He keeps denying his love for her, trying to discourage her into letting go of it. He turns his back on her, but still watches from afar. She knows he feels the same way and in the end she succeeds.
End.
-----------------------------------
No, I don't wanna fade
I wanna burst into black
Don't want to be saved
Listen to beats as you all turn your backs
Turn up the bass
This is gonna sound full
Soften the drums
The guitar needs to pull
No dreams of stars
I see them for my eyes
See them differently
Feel them swirl and collide
You turn and say 'You don't even know'
But I know
and you don't understand
This isn't for show
No I don't wanna fade
I wanna burst into black
Don't want to be saved
I daydream as you all turn your backs
I cry out again
The words just don't flow
My frustration is peaked
'Just don't let it show'
Adrenaline's pumped
Needed to borrow his heart
Keep me from dying
Didn't want it to part
Then you turn and say 'You don't even know'
But I know
And you don't want to throw this away
These nights when
All we did was dream
Music, content in our hearts
Stars bright, perfect it had seemed
And we hadn't cared
But this is important
It's perfection is key
It needs to relay to him
If only to make him see
I could die without it
I need to borrow his heart
But this time is different
It doesn't need to part
Turn up the bass
This is gonna sound full
Soften the drums
The guitar needs to pull
I don't dream of stars
I see them in your eyes
Feelings that swell
They swirl and collide
You turn and say 'You don't even know'
But I know
how you feel and
I hope that it shows
-----------------------------------
For anyone who doesn't understand, this is about a carefree, kind of immature girl who finds that she loves this guy. He's kind of serious, but great in almost every way. She's so infatuated with him that she just goes ahead and tells him, only to be crushed when he becomes flustered and a little bit angry with her. They were great friends and so she tries to communicate with him through music, trying to make everything perfect, blocking out everything while attempting to. He keeps denying his love for her, trying to discourage her into letting go of it. He turns his back on her, but still watches from afar. She knows he feels the same way and in the end she succeeds.
End.
Log in to rate and review this story