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Like a Swan
6 ReviewsJay and Theresa are out on their first date. Archie and Atlanta are having their own fun. Can this day get any better? YOU BET IT CAN! J/T, A/A
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Like a Swan
(#) hachoo 2006-10-20 08:24:57 PM
awesome! i love j/t. cool story!Author's response
glad you liked it -
Like a Swan
(#) RainPaw 2006-10-20 10:58:55 PM
That was great! you have a real nak for writing good stories.
Ok I know this is off topic but who the hell is Mary-Sue? people say so-in-so is Mary-Sue, but what/who is she?Author's response
Thanks. i guess my writing improved because of my love for reading. People says that you can improve your writing a lot if you read lots of book.
i'm exactly sure but i think Mary-Sue is a term used to describe a character. go to wikipedia.org it should tell you what it means... Wikipedia is my #1 info source, lol -
Like a Swan
(#) iheartyou07 2006-10-21 10:06:45 AM
aww, that was reallly cute, and sweet. I loved it! i'm more of a JT fan, but AA were adorable too:D Loved it, please keep writting!
Oh, and for RainPaw, I think (keyword=think) Mary-Sue is this 'perfect' character, and as Ficwad's rating says, either you love her, or you hate her. So she/he might not be very popular. Not sure though, so don't quote me. Anyways, great job on the oneshot!!Author's response
Thanks..right now, a quarter of my brain is thinking about math hw (grrr..), a quarter is thinking about chapter 3 for twins, another quarter is thinking about this oneshot i'm going to write later and the last quarter is thinking about the sequel for twins...i'm overdoing it, ain't i? -
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(#) dancechickie222 2006-10-22 10:11:26 AM
hey awsom story, I really loved it but just one question... where does the 'Like a Swan' come in? I mean, great story but the title duzn't really match the story in my opinion.. it was good though.Author's response
thank you...like i said i said these swans at the harbor and they looked like in love. and you know how when they put their head together it kinda form a heart thing right? so in the story is how both couples can join their head together and look into each other's heart only to find true love. hope that make sense and sry about the confusion of the title -
Like a Swan
(#) Sparky 2007-01-18 03:41:27 PM
I liked how you showed what was on Archie's mind and it was extremley cute!
and i like how everyone uses Theresa's Puppy pout in their stories
Good jod keep up de good work