(#) iheartyou07 2006-10-21awww, that was sweet. And I'm sad to see this story/series end! It was all so amazing! But great things must eventually come to an end, I guess. sniff sniff I loved this 'series' from Chapter 1, and I'm glad to hear you're still going to write more stories! I'm also glad to hear that your wrist is better:D So, keep up the amazing work, I'm never disapointed when it comes to your writting! Oh, and I would tell you to have a sequel, but a lot of times when people have the original heroes' kids be the new heroes, it just kills it.. for me at least. Not that I wouldn't love to read more, but it's up to you. Anyways, loved it, awesome job!!
- That was great the end of a great story and a great serires of stories. Wow I can't belive it's all over, Like when someone tells you someone you know has died you feel nothing at first just this big sinking feeling in your stomach then it hits you. Most likely in a few minutes it'll sink in and I'll start crying. Great story, keep writing
(#) chickiedeedo 2006-10-22I can't wait for cross roads it's in a few hours! Anyway that was pretty good but still I have questions, in the first of the three you said that when Theresa tried to open the door to the hideout it didn't work and you said that it would explain later in the story but I don't think it did. Anyway that was kinda confusing but still good!
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