"I never had time to be in that phase between boy and man, at least not in any sense that made it apparent to the world. Poor Miss Swann, though, was right in the public eye when she went through h...
Wow. You've made them sound like really good mates and I think you've captured Elizabeth's character really well.
Seems a touch shy of real IC, but I do like how you have Will think of her as "Miss." That's just how he'd be taught, I think.
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