belle continues to show her resentment towards the new love in her brother's life. will she finally push him away?
(#) youngandreckless 2006-10-24he hit her? wow. update again soon! I wanna read more! happy birthday again! xoxo -- Laura
Author's responsei'm going to defend patrick on this one, not only because he's hot, but also because if someone hit me, i'd hit them back too. plus, a patrick stump bitch slap is priceless.
- Happy birthday to you
I hope a very happy and a very naked _____ jumps out of your cake.
Or if you like the kinkyness [like every other freak on this site does...including me] then you can have ALL FOUR!
Author's responseby far the greatest birthday wish sent my way. i dunno if i want to see joe naked. he has a fro up top. god, i'm dirty
- This is getting very heated. I'm enjoying it greatly! Happy Birthday!
Author's responseit is getting heated. it's about to blow up, actually. spontaneously combust, if you will allow such terminology.
thanks for the birthday wish. i had cheez-its for my birthday dinner. This review is better than cheez-it birthday dinners. which says a lot, because i adore cheez-its.
- That was almost as amazing as you. But not quite.
Author's responsewe are so having sex. you called me amazing. thats hot
(#) whatkatydid 2006-10-25I think i nearly knawed of a finger in the excitement but really, you weren't wrong when you said drama right?
It was written with such charatcer provocation and I enjoyed every single word.
PS. More. Hey shorty, it's yer birfday, ya gonna write some mo' cos it's yer birfday!
Author's responsewell thank you for the kind words, and semi-quoting 50 cent. that's pretty impressive, i'm not gonna lie
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-10-25Funny thing is I was just listening to A New Found Glory´s cover of "Dont´wanna miss a thing". Great work on this one. I love how Patrick stands up for his love (the sleazy whore). Hope you had a happy birthday filled with tons of ace ideas how to continue this story!
i have a lot going on in this crazy mind of mine. after chapter 11 it's full of drama and suspense, and craziness, so brace yourself.
(#) killxsmile 2006-11-03maybe we are soulmates...either that or there's some crazy psychic connection going on.
anyways, i'm loving this story.
Author's responselet's just be honest here..."don't want to miss a thing" is not a revolutionary song. it's hardly memorable. but the fact that we both referenced that song in our stories means that we either:
a.) have a morbid obsession with aerosmith or
b.) are literary soulmates.
i'm thinkin' that it's option b.) because i'm not a big fan of late aerosmith.
(#) isuckatlifen 2006-12-18ohhhh good chapter im not wanting to beat the shit out of patrick which i could considering im at least 5'' taller than him ha stupid leprichan no i love him just not right now
Author's responseplease don't hurt the hatrack... :)
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