everyone is in pain. it's the agony scene. (my roomy listens to metal. some of it actually sticks in my brain)
- this makes my blood run cold in fear.
and then i remember that you totaly changed the subject from hot secks to hot drama and violence.
i still love you, but you owe me seck.
hot damn secks.
Author's responsewell that is the idea. i want to scare your pants off. literally ;)
dirty hot secks comes to those who wait. and didn't you just relieve yourself of all "sexual frustration"? I know i did. wowza.
(#) AshleyChaotic 2006-10-29 07:26:13 PMOMG this is so great.
Author's responsethe "OMG" is what sparked my attention. Thank you for reading. I think it's great too.
- You sure do know how to keep people attached to their computer screen. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the characters! It makes me almost giddy. Oh, who am I kidding? I am giddy!
Author's responsei feel like i'm getting into this weird crazy not-so-realistic drama situation, but, well, that's why it's called fiction. i'm trying to make it exciting and on-the-edge-of-your-seat. thank you for being a fantastic reviewer. i love you for it.
oh, and i expect an update from you, missy.
Author's responsewell, my real life officially "sucks" and i'm trying to sort all of the crazies out right now. i guess my insomnia comes in handy during times like these, because i am substituting sleep with writing, and my fingers ache terribly.
i should update tuesday. thats the plan anyway.
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-10-30 02:07:18 PMi review, you post more. deal? :]
i love it! but this is scary... patrick shouldnt be too mad that pete is w/ her... but then again... i dunno.
Author's responsei'll make that deal.
patrick is going through a lot right now in the story… have you ever heard the phrase "the straw that broke the camels back"? well, prepare yourself for that in the next chapter.
(#) whatkatydid 2006-10-31 09:46:19 AMHeck you must watch a lot of crime, you wrote it down to a fricking 'T', I was totally there in the room with them when they got that phone call.
I love plots like this, I awlays love watching crime because I'm ALWAY wrong when I'm trying to suss it out, just like I will be with this.
I'm watching the fact that the plot is close to home to ( involving Kevin ) will he do his job though?
I promise I'll love you forever, have your children and hand feed you grapes for life if you update sooner rather than later?????
Author's responsewhen normal kids were watching rainbow brite i was watching Law and Order. that's a lie, because they didn't come on at the same time. but i did watch it alot.
the big question is what could possibly connect brock to kevin? well, read chapter 14 and find out. it's a biggun.
seriously though, i love your reviews. and grapes are the shit.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-02 10:47:56 AMWell, I´m glad I have a username that allows itself to be worked into other people´s stories in a fairly easy way. Thanks for the footnote. I still owe you a reference. (AH! THE GODDAMN PRESSURE! ;) ) This is an amazing chapter. Very intense. I´m loving it. It´s a nice change from your usual he-loves-her-she-loves-him-but-doesn´t-know-and-now-I´m-just-keeping-on-typing-so-the-word-gets-longer-and-longer drama. Crime´s ace... Well, not really, but your crime story sure is! :)
Author's responseokay, that was not a cleverly planned scheme devised to get my name in your story. i swear, that just came to my brain, and it fit so i used it. that's how fantastical my brain works.
thank you for the nice words. i agree, this story was a little too lovey-dovey "i want to be with you forever, just not right now". it's a'changin though.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-02 04:07:06 PMI know that you didn´t put me in there just so I´d put you into my crap story. (Consider it done, nevertheless. ;) ) Also, to clarify another misunderstanding, I wasn´t refering to your story with the lovey-dovey centeredness. :)
Author's responsewell, i know you have obligations to others…and i don't want to read something abstract about a pixie with a secret hiding in joe's monstrous fro. it may disappoint me ;)...who am i kidding? your writing could never disappoint me...
i was the one to refer to my story as “lovey-dovey”. some chapters seem much more cookie-cutter then i intended them to be, so i guess your review gave me a chance to voice that.