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Made of Stone
18 ReviewsBeing determined isn't always enough -- but it can be a start. Ledgends don't come popping out of the wood work -- unless you make them. Six new trainers begin their journeys, and they begin to rea...
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Made of Stone
(#) Lettuce 2007-03-12 02:18:06 PM
This story sucks more than a gay vampire. I cant believe you have the audacity( -
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(#) Lettuce 2007-03-13 02:17:54 PM
Was audacity too big of a word for you? How can you write a story so bad it makes shit turn away in disgust? If by some chance hell happens to freeze over and you ever get laid, your children will be known as "retarded embodied". Oooh, big word! Dont worry, just sound it out. I would call you a fag but you'd probaly take that as a compliment. I have nothing against homosexuals, i just hate retarded homosexuals who write gay stories about subjects that they still like when they when they are 30. Sound Familiar? Your story sucks so badly it makes Ryan Seacrest look straight. I wish a plauge of Locusts and Frogs upon your home and (in case hell just happens to freeze over) the death of your firstborn child which will no doubt increase the country's average IQ level by at least 50%. -
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(#) Lettuce 2007-03-13 02:26:23 PM
One more thing, this is you...
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"I'm gay. I play Pokeman with my husband on weekdays. On weekends I listen to Hoobastank and fallout Boy. Even though they Hoobasuck, I am extremely attracted to the singers."
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(#) Faeriegirl 2007-05-04 09:29:01 AM
Trite? What trite? I really liked this chapter. I don't think Mel is boring, she's just normal, which nice, makes it easy to identify with her. You really got across the way that, despite their wishes to be independant, the children are still very vulnerable and have to be bailed out by adults when things go wrong, which makes a lot of sense. I do find it difficult to believe that Chronos, being a computer, would help people without being given the comman to, but maybe I just don't read enough sci-fi o.0 It was nice to see Matt opening up a bit, he's becoming one of my favourite characters. You handled the scene very well, its a delacate one and you nailed it. Anyway, I'm addicted to this one so thank you :)