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The Next Morning

by BrendaChenowith 1 Reviews

the next morning

Category: Six Feet Under - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Brenda, Nate - Published: 2006/11/02 - Updated: 2006/11/03 - 561 words

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  • The Story of Syd: the Third Chenowith child

    (#) Rab 2006-11-26 01:08:31 PM

    I haven't watched Six Feet Under at all lately so this was interesting to read. There were a few typo's and grammatical errors that can easily be fixed. Also you might want to think of word transitions instead of having a lot of "Said, asked, and replied". But yeah, I enjoyed reading it.

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