Harry Potter has been trained by a certain Dark wizard since he turned five. What happens when now fifteen years old Harry arrives his first time to Hogwarts to get his OWLs?
(#) foolishwandwaver 2006-11-04 08:05:49 PMWhew! What a ride! great fight descriptions. Harry is strong and savvy, but not almighty...and his reaction to loosing his hand was believable. Great Chapter.
Author's responseYeah, I hate it when Harry is completely unbeatable and the fights are merely lists of ultra powerful spells of doom. The hand thing was merely to show that even against inferior foe victory is by no means guaranteed. Thanks for reading! Random Shinobi
(#) TheIllusiveOne 2006-11-05 02:21:50 AMMeh. I dunno, I find this really boring. Way too many super-powered OC's.
Author's responseWay too many super-powered OC's? There is only one OC that one could call super-powered, and he gots himself killed pretty soon. And the fact that he got himself killed tells us that he wasn't super-powered after all. But yes, the first chapters are slightly boring. It takes some time to lay the foundations. Random Shinobi