Harry Potter has been trained by a certain Dark wizard since he turned five. What happens when now fifteen years old Harry arrives his first time to Hogwarts to get his OLWs?
- i like this, i just found the story, its brilliantly written. sorry to see the mentor die, but shit happens. so what will harry be doing now...
is this a Harry/Tonks or Harry/Ama fics... thats what i am hoping for anyway, let us know... congrats so far.
Author's responseHarry will be going Hogwarts. As for Harry dating Nymhadora or Amaterasu, well, I think they are bit too old for him. At least in the first part of my trilogy. Random Shinobi
- I have got to say that your fic's okay so far, Its headed in sort of the right direction. I mean i had trouble beleiving tonks got over the rape so quick but hey in don't think the agnst would have fit the story. I hope you don't take this story into the weasley granger tritory or too far into sytheryn kids with plans to rule the world. Aside from that the fights are pretty good with pretty good charaterization. So keep up the good work.
Author's responseLike I made Harry say, "I'm no good in psychology." Besides that part was not witnessed through her eyes, so we don't know exactly what she was thinking. And remember, she was unconscious when she got raped. Anyway, thanks for the review! Random Shinobi
(#) foolishwandwaver 2006-11-04 09:13:20 PMWish kierion hadn't died, hopefully he left Harry another 'globe' or instructions on how to make one since he was apparently a great scholar along with being a healer. Just please, if Harry goes to Hogwarts, keep him away from Ginny or hermione. This Harry is way too savvy to think of hooking up with either of them.
Author's responseKheiron died and Harry got his ass kicked to show us the power of Voldemort and Co. As for what Kheiron left to Harry, you will see... eventually. And what's wrong with Ginny and Hermione? Random Shinobi
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-05 01:29:19 AMAn outstanding quadruple update. I really like the way this story is taking shape. Too bad he's got red eyes, though.
Author's responseI assume you are preferring Harry, not Kheiron or Voldemort. Anyway, the eyes aren't always red. They glow red only when the charms are activated. There will be full explanation later on. Thanks for reading! Random Shinobi
- This seems like a rip off of the "Stranger in an unholy land" fan fic...
Author's responseYou know, this fic was finished far before that one. Besides, SIAUL is a fic where Harry travels to an alternative dimension and gains the skills of his evil counterpart. Plot wise the fics are completely different. There are a few similarities like the name 'Dark Knight' and the fact that Harry uses a sword. And you know, both of those are so terribly original... The author of SIAUL most certainly wasn't the first to use them.