this chapter is like one of my dreams.
err, i mean...
(#) PiecesInMe 2006-11-04 08:59:47 PM
You naughty naughty girl.
yes evie(moocow) im talking to you.
this chapter was oh-so-seductive.
So basically, I'm extremely happy right now. Becuase your stories are happiness in the form of writing.
well i hope she gets some
Whoohoo! Tacos w/ spicy, spicy hot sauce and sour cream! Oh and yeah, Pete does tend to have that effect. For real.
Lovely as always, Evie.
(#) lolo87 2006-11-04 10:04:11 PM
I love that "Brooke myself" lol
I glanced over at Pete who at the very moment glanced up, his hand tightening and let me tell you, sour cream going everywhere.
I laughed so hard at that.
I'm not sure why.
This story reminds me of good old drunken times. Hah.
Fuck now I want some el taco bell. Fuckers that burnt it down last year.
YES THAT WAS HOT.
YES I'M A PERV!
NO I DO NOT DENY IT.
(#) imogen993 2006-11-04 11:32:23 PM
EVIEEEEEE's Gunna getta someee!
I was drunk yesterday.
I actually wrote that review on the last chapter whilst I was drunk.
Haha, drunkeness is cool.
I thought I told you the song would embarrass me. Ah well, it was funny nonetheless. It really did fit the drunkenness. So much sex talk in this one, Jesus, girl!
"I think I might need to 'Brooke' myself..."
Hahaha, lmfao. That was good. I love how you have footnotes for everything. It just makes it more interesting. I really love this story, like, srsly, wow. ♥
(#) sing4me09 2006-11-05 08:43:24 AM
omg...Pete and Evie...are SOOO getting it on in the next chapter!