When would be the best point in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? Right before the First Task! In this chapter, the Second Task.
- Nice alternate vision of the Second Task. I like the Dragon Mark and the effect it is having on the students and teachers. I can't wait for Draco to try something stupid, because he will and he will ignore Snape's warning to do so.
Is this heading in your usual H/Hr/L direction? I get the feeling that you like the pair... no... tri-ing? I think you give a good reason for it in one story - Hermione is the intellectual and Luna is the spiritual. That doesn't mean that I support it particularly, but I think that your rationale is good.
Looking forward to seeing more.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10
Author's responseNo, Luna is close to them, but not that close, at least in the main story.
(#) smargden_2005 2006-11-05 07:52:23 AMHai - I'm back again,
And thank you for the fast update, it realy was a god day.
a litle short it was - onely 8 pages in my formating. But god.
I did like "merlins mark" I hope it can do some god later on.
And yes - Draco doing something stupid - as he normaly do. :-))
To not kep your time reading her I stop my review now so you can return to writing : again thank you
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- OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I loved it and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I do however wonder if Harry is going to do anything outrageously insane like he sometimes does? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)