When would be the best point in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? Right before the First Task! In this chapter, the Second Task.
(#) BenRG 2006-11-05
Nice alternate vision of the Second Task. I like the Dragon Mark and the effect it is having on the students and teachers. I can't wait for Draco to try something stupid, because he will and he will ignore Snape's warning to do so.
Is this heading in your usual H/Hr/L direction? I get the feeling that you like the pair... no... tri-ing? I think you give a good reason for it in one story - Hermione is the intellectual and Luna is the spiritual. That doesn't mean that I support it particularly, but I think that your rationale is good.
Looking forward to seeing more.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10
No, Luna is close to them, but not that close, at least in the main story.
This chapter just flowed. Every scene worked together very well. And I liked the way Dumbledore moved the contestants: that was perfectly IC.
I enjoyed this latest installment of your fic and am anxiously waiting for the next one. Keep up the good work Doc.
Hai - I'm back again,
And thank you for the fast update, it realy was a god day.
a litle short it was - onely 8 pages in my formating. But god.
I did like "merlins mark" I hope it can do some god later on.
And yes - Draco doing something stupid - as he normaly do. :-))
To not kep your time reading her I stop my review now so you can return to writing : again thank you
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Interesting update. I like how you're introducing new things in every chapter rather than just showing how an older Harry would react to this situation again. Great work.
(#) Jimm 2006-11-05
Good chapter. Thanks for sharing it with us.
I'm loving this story and can't wait until Luna forms a triad with them!
Harry's responce to Dumbledore; "so you did." Now, how great was that!Practically snorted the coffee I was drinking all over the keyboard!
Luna's character just keeps getting better with each chapter she's in.
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I loved it and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I do however wonder if Harry is going to do anything outrageously insane like he sometimes does? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
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