'"I don't know how to tell you this, mate, but you're a homicidal, insane teenager with magical powers that make Dumbledore jealous." - Seamus Finnigan.' In which Harry's mental state is discussed....
(#) DrT 2006-11-02 05:07:23 AM
V. interesting opening. I hope to see more soon.
(#) fopalup 2006-11-02 05:29:38 AM
An interesting way to write, with several points of view in one chapter. I'm hoping to see more soon, you have piqued my interest.
(#) banner 2006-11-02 10:00:21 AM
I'm confused, bewildered, intrigued, and amused. I only wish you'd posted this one on a Monday...
I'mm having a wonderful time!
(#) Jimm 2006-11-04 08:39:21 AM
Very interesting start. It has some good humor, and has definitely caught my interest. Hopefully more is coming soon. :-) Thanks for sharing it with us.
(#) BenRG 2006-11-04 09:18:59 AM
Well, this promises to be quite funny, possibly moving and insightful too. I hope that you let Harry work out his 'issues' (explosively on a certain Albino Ferret, if you must).
However, the thought that the other Gryff boys have been putting heavy-duty calming and mind-focussing spells on him for the last few years tickles my funnybone. I hope that there is a little interesting chaos (especially if Hermone tries to 'help', in her usual forthright manner).
I'll be looking out for updates!
BenRG's Rating: 7/10
(#) Luna Lovgood 2006-11-08 12:59:58 PM
Loveing this story, can't wait to hear more, so hurry up :P
(#) snowman 2006-11-08 07:41:39 PM
(#) Jenny89 2007-11-15 05:08:14 AM
Please continue it?