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Just Anutha Memory - one shot

by x-xJafax-x 1 Reviews

This was written for ma bessie mate as she is currently OBSESSED with tyson ritter so enjoy

Category: All-American Rejects - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/07 - Updated: 2006/11/07 - 273 words - Complete

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  • Just Anutha Memory - one shot

    (#) RocketQueen1 2009-01-27 11:56:59 PM

    I don't mean to be bitchy, but I've got some tips for you about speech etc.

    The phone call should've been something like this:
    "Whaddup?" I asked.
    "Wanna go to a concert with me?" my friend replied.
    And so on.

    For the talk with Tyson, it needs capital letters, and the same format as the phone call;
    "Tyson?" I asked.
    "Miss me?" he replied.

    Hope this helps a bit. :)

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