(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-07i'm interested to see where this is going. The first chapter isn’t overly suspenseful, and you refrained from giving too many details about the main character. It’s refreshing.
i'm a sucker for attention to detail and setting an ambiance for the story. your first chapter proved to do exactly that.
Author's responseIt should get interesting. However, at first I´m afraid that it might drag a little. But I just don´t want to give away the "twist" too early. I´ll just concentrate on this mysterious character for a while. (Next chapter you´ll find out who they are. If you haven´t already guessed. Or cheated by asking your magical CRYSTAL ball... There ya go with the lame jokes.) Again, thank you very much for the praise. :) That was exactly what I was aiming for.
(#) bandgeekfreak 2006-11-08Strangely, one of my friends wrote a story sort of like this, but it had nothing to do with Fall Out Boy. Hey, as long as there's not a ton of romance I'm game. :)
Author's responseWell, I´m just gonna be all cocky (i.e. petey) and say that I wonder if you´ll still tell me that this story resembles the one of your friend after you´ve learned THE TRUTH (imagine some dramatical music to go with the meaningful capitalization) about the protagonist´s imprisonment. Also, I think I´ll change the names and probably some things of this story and post it in the "original" section of ficwad (once it´s been read and reviewed on here) to have people who have the general notion that fanfic must automatically be shallow and suck giving this story a chance. It´s not gonna be a ton. Probably not really romance at all. But definitely some musing on relationships, I´m afraid. ;)
(#) luckysgc921 2006-11-08has the jigsaw killer captured someone in FOB?! cause that'd be wicked cool. like incredibly uber cool to the ultimate level.
I'm a horror movie geek and my dream is to be in a cheesy b-grade flick with corn syrup blood and everything.
shutting up now.
fabulous start. :)
Author's responseYesterday, as I was working on upcoming chapters I thought the exact same thing. Well, I´m gonna spoil it: No, it´s not Jigsaw but I´ll have the protagonist think of that possibility to scare the shit outta him. (This story is not so much horror as it is... well, supernatural really.) ;) I´m definitely hooked on horror flicks too. (What´s your favorite? It shouldn´t be hard to work that one into The Bass Files. ;) Given the fact that I´m familiar with it, of course... I´ve worked my Freddy Krueger into it as well.) I´m happy to have you on board with me with this story as well! :))) Maybe I´ll get down to writing a cheap horror plot sometime. Then you can be the first three hot girls that get killed + the obligatory black person (don´t worry, we can spray-paint you if necessary) that is killed as the first person + the killer. The budget is probably gonna be microscopic...
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