Atlanta buys a new perfume but it smells like dead skunk! How will Archie tell her how he realy feels about her with that awful smell under his nose?
Aww so cute!!!I loved it Ace!!:D:D
Hehe lol,neil always faints from the perfume,and poor archie,3 hours with a nasty smell,I odda say that made his day,and YAY THEY KISSED!love it,update soon
thet was kinda strange but the best one yet. I love A/A and i am getting a kitten called alanta tommorow
LMAO that was really funny, espically the whole Barney part
Great story ^^
Wow you keep on getting better and better.
Great story! did it really smell that bad? wow :P
i loved it! it was hilarious.. but i have some constructive criticism. I think your endings are a bit too cheezy and too predictable. But other than that, it was super funni~ =)
I was laughing so hard with the whole Neil. And I felt sorry for poor Herry at the beggining, along with Archie. But at the end was cute.
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