When would be the best point in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? Right before the First Task! In this chapter, the events leading up to the start of the Third Task.
- really well done, i think you made a mistake at then end a type-o. oh well. so the story is about to come to a close, well Voldemort will be dead, i have no idea where you wish to go from there.
are you going to write about the next few yrs, where Harry leaves Hogwarts, prepares his new school and etc.
anyway i look forward to voldy getting an ass whopping... will Harry be bringing in the DEs as well. I would love to see malfoy captures, etc...
Author's responseNo Death Eaters will be captured or tried (Big Evil Grin).
(#) smargden_2005 2006-11-08 07:37:48 AMoh - 8 pages was red in a blink,
And your replay (Author's Response: No Death Eaters will be captured or tried (Big Evil Grin). "T")
Yes -ALL marked are going to be dead - yes ?
And captured = not dead.
I think ALL D.E. are going to be (out of streats) and it will be easy to bring ALL of them.
Lucius Malfoy - Yes,
The rat - Yes.
And all of the others too.
What I see is that the story are coming close to the end. That is NOT GOD.
Did you drop a hint that the story will continue with a folow up - the new school time ?
I hope so
God job all of your storys.
and thank you for leting us read
Author's responseWell, your english is better than my (now non-existant) French ever was! There are two epilogs coming.
- Good story but with one bad side all the plot always go in Harry's favors it will be more interesting if a few things will go against him ( butterfly effect ) ex: that Voldemort survive in his "meeting" withe Harry.
Despit this little critic I like your fics. Good work
A french reader.
PS: I know that this is a H/Hr fic but like Sirius I think that Hr/H/Luna will be better ( I like luna and think that she eserve to be Happy with Harry and that Hermione is openminded enough to accept Luna and be in a "ménage à trois")