Just another day of babysitting.
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-10 03:54:56 PMi think what i love most about this story is how you describe things with humor. "I frowned at the box adorning a cartoon vampire with a chocolate fixation" i dunno, but i laughed.
Author's responseIt's funny that you say that. Making non-humorous things hilarious has forever been my downfall. It always seems to get me in trouble. I'm glad someone likes it.
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-15 02:24:36 PM"About a week or so. It should slowly get better. Until then, don't wear your favorite pair of jeans." I rolled my eyes. You shouldn't have told him about Pete's stomach pyrotechnics.
All I'm going to do , is calmly go down to the bottom of page, and give you a 'Funny' rating.
I'm being very careful not to move because you have placed my bladder in a very very fragile position of involuntary urination at any moment.
I'm now going to step away from this story, very gently, and relieve myself...... or the urine....
Author's responseI'm glad you enjoyed it. :) My condolences to your bladder, though.
(#) poisonedhalo 2006-11-18 04:37:55 AMhey hey hey
im loving this very much....gold star 4 u hahaha, interesting i like it...im not good at reviews so ill leave it at that
keep going tho i really wana know wat happens next and if Pete will eva get out of bed, the poor bugger
Author's responseAw, thank you for reviewing, that was just fine. Pete will get out of bed and eventually get back into it, rawr!....I've said too much!
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-29 03:10:31 PMThe grotesque bat shaped globs of refined sucrose disappeared under the sea of milk -> WHOA. That's some image. I'm stumped.
Incredible read again. I'm pratically begging you to let me give you a rating point. Yes? Thanks....
Author's responseI don't understand the whole "rating system" thing, so sorry I didn't give out points. I always forget. But I think I gave you a bunch...I think.