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Chapter 4

by wimvincken 3 Reviews

Dumbledore thinks that something drastically must happen in order to win the fight against Voldemort ... and he finds an ancient disease, which turns the three victims into walking bombs ... he inf...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor, Romance - Characters: Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Dumbledore, Ginny, Harry, Molly Weasley, Other - Published: 2006/11/15 - Updated: 2006/11/15 - 3551 words

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  • Triangle Complex

    (#) AnnF 2006-11-15 10:08:08 AM

    augh. Beta needed desperately. Also if they are supposed to explode if too far apart why the hell are they apparating alone?

    Author's response

    You want to beta?
  • Triangle Complex

    (#) Skoell 2006-11-15 10:17:34 PM

    how come that harry can leave for the mall alone when he and the girls are supposed to explode when they are more than 25 meter apart from each other?

    Author's response

    That was a major screw up.
    I had it corrected, and in a way submitted the same story again.
    I have it corrected here. Sorry about that.

    Thanks for the review,

    Wim
  • Triangle Complex

    (#) Dragen 2006-11-18 02:36:59 AM

    Forgive my flame, but the fucking asshole Dumbledore, he is willing to kill four babies so whatever plan he has, will work, the asshole.

    At least Harry is taking control and learnt that he and his two girls and wandless magic and can apparated... and Harry can contorl the goblin (cool), I don't think the fucking asshole Dumbledore, is going to be happy about this :D

    Keep up the great work.

    oh, yes... I think the twins will find it funny that Harry and the two girls robeb the wizarding bank, which no done before, I know I thought it was funny LoL

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