"Archie, NO!" Atlanta screamed running towards him.....Theresa, Jay, Neil and Herry were battling three of Cronus' giants....
ohh pretty good. And the last line was really good I'm not sure why but it was, is this story done?
Good job. I would've liked to see a bit more of tragic emotion, but I was satisfied. Keep writing. -Nuuoa
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!You killed...k-i-l-l-e-d ARCHIE!!!!!AND HERRY!AND ODIE!AND THERESA!!!!!!!!!!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH you could have killed Neil instead of Archie..update soon
Very well done. I hope the story continues, I hope that wasn't the end. rates moving
aw that mmade me cry! Plz let Theresa and them come back! Jay and Atlanta never really had a chance with them! To show their true feelings!! Aw. I'm rating yur story moving.
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