It wasn't a gift she asked for, but a gift just the same. Noise was overrated, plus, she had beautiful hands (or, so some had said.) She didn't really ask for a sweet love triangle, though, eith...
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-18 12:16:16 PMi was about to submit this review and my computer died. i had a huge in depth "oh emm gee" type of review. let's see what i can do about recreating it.
let me first start out by saying i am thoroughly impressed by your ability to pull so many different aspects of life into this one story.
it is so well written that i find myself being able to understand exactly how the character feels, and how she thinks about things.
i was floored by the meg describing patrick as gray, and her reasoning behind it. the whole first paragraph was so well written that i could hardly breathe.
lines i loved in this chapter:
"Not someone struggling for the light, but a shadow content with being just that. A shadow. Not copying. Not mimicking."
"Is being treated for bipolarism...unsuccessfully."
"The alphabet, dude. I know the mother fucking alphabet."
i am giving Katy a huge hug for suggesting this one.
but i'll give you a bigger one for writing it.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-20 08:30:22 AMI just added you to my buddy list on AIM. You´ll be harrassed soon. Very soon, my friend. HA HA HA! ... Yes, Mom... yes, I´ll tune it down a bit... geez...
Author's responseIM ME! i have maybe gotten 4 IM's from aim in my life, because i really don't have any friends.
aw, i'm sad for me now.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-29 07:45:58 AMHere's some crap info that fits with this story's title. Today in discourse analysis class the prof was going on about how sets of three are a typical classical literary ... THING. Like having a sentence go "She decided to write this in the reviews section, did so and nobody cared."
Interesting, isn't it? Well, you're pretty classical and pretty literary, Sarah. Also, pretty pretty as well.
Author's responsehaha. thanks. i did the sets of three things cause i was thinking about my english class from last year and some professor that had come and some other shit. i don't really remember.
i think i wanted it to be abstract and i kept using things in three's. whatever. no one's really that interested in my reasonings.
thank for calling me pretty. that's very nice of you...
(spanking you and making you like it...)