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After the Battle
A few weeks after the final battle, Hermione is offered comfort, and then more, by Luna.
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After the Battle
(#) Rocky235 2007-06-28
Hermione's and Luna's dialog was done in a sensual manor. It was very soft and even. It gave the story a wonderful mood. I feel at peace and happy for the both of them.
Good job!After the Battle
(#) msgriggs 2007-10-27
Good story, that's sad that Ron wasn't a champ in bed...I'm glad Hermione found some pleasure, it makes everyone's life better.After the Battle
(#) dennisud 2008-01-17
Thank you for writing a very enticing story with my favorit HP trio!
I hope one of your sagas I haven't read has them together eventually so I'm lowing through them as fast as I can!
dennisudAfter the Battle
(#) red_jacobson 2008-04-19
i think this is my favorite of your stories, and i know it's the basis of one of my favorite ships, although I tend to want Padma in the mix as well.
I'm sorry you ran out of ideas for more of this story; but I'll still enjoy what you have posted.
redAfter the Battle
(#) Clell65619 2008-06-18
Good one Doc, just found this when it was the featured story. Thanks.After the Battle
(#) Fyrecat 2009-05-04
Nice. one of my favourite... pairings? Groupings? Groupings seems more correct.
Yes, very nice indeed.After the Battle
(#) walkabouttigger 2009-11-30
While the only "out-of-place" dialogue of Luna I could find was her use of the "C" word, I think she is spot on otherwise. I think Luna would, in fact, be open and communicative to someone she loved, especially when alone with that person.
This is my favorite triangle. Having read "Larceny, Lechery and Luna Lovegood" prior to this, I think some of this is what was missing from that story.
The nuance of Harry being completely sexually repressed is one I have not seen before but would agree is likely, in the event one or more of the Dursleys did not sexually abuse him.
All-in-all, a well-written one-shot.After the Battle
(#) TurtleBlue 2010-05-25
I somehow missed this little gem, since I try to read everything written by my fav fic writers of which you are one.
I enjoyed the sugery Luna was performing on Hermione's relationship (if you could call it that)with "Won-Won". He displayed as much concern in their love nest as he did while they were going thru the years in Hogwarts as students - None at all! Only his pleasure and pleasing his ponce ego counted for anything - nothing for what Hermione was concern with, her hopes, her dreams. Glad Fate lent her a hand (or a reducto to the head) to give her true freedom - to be the best she could be. With Ron, this would never have happened. She would have been better off with Nevelle. He would not have forced her into a "burrow" cage but would have joyed with the maturation of such a brilliant being as he joys with the growth he encorages with the plant life that gives him confort and joy.
Awaiting future lore from a master...
TurtleblueAfter the Battle
(#) Dovian 2010-06-05
Great start! Keep going. This I know you will be able to take far with how i see you can write, and you can write very well.
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