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• The Rain

  (#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14

  ver creppy, yet interesting at the same time

• The Rain

  (#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-15

  I feel like reviewing this story again, since I like it. Update fast!

  Author's response

  Thank you very much! I shall be trying to update as I have new things.

• The Rain

  (#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-15

  I feel like reviewing this story again, since I like it. Update fast!

• The Rain

  (#) elizedward23 2006-10-29

  Really good! Strong imagery and plot. And the little girl was really cute!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much1 I am glad you enjoyed it too

• The Rain

  (#) LoveSnape 2006-11-01

  wow! this was fabulous!! im wondering... are you still writing this? or was it like a one-shot? Im just thinking of the possibilities... Imean, a narrative of Charlie's life would be hella cool... Anyway, I really liked!! Thanks for fabulousness!
  FYI: its a little difficult to read, maybe another line break to separate paragraphs? that'd make it easier.
  Thanks again!
  Saffron

  Author's response

  Thank you very much. I wasn't sure if I was going to put another section in but I will think about it now. Thank you for the feedback about the paragraph. I will definitely get around to that!

• The Rain

  (#) LoveSnape 2006-12-11

  Ah, but Part one still has a few paragraph issues... Nothing too drastic, just a little distracting. It's up to you to fix it or not.
  In any case, I love this, as you very well know ;D
  Much love,
  Saffy

• The Rain

  (#) Silverwingsofthefire 2007-04-16

  Oh my gosh. That's all i can try to type. I've never...ever read something like that. how did you learn to write like that. i'm told i'm good...but...not compared to even that first chapter. that was...wow.

  Author's response

  Thanks so much! I know I read your Secrets revealed I rated but I never commented sorry! I really liked it though. I am glad you enjoyed it!

• The Rain

  (#) Kitia 2007-08-17

  I liked it. I think maybe, if you were going for the 'moving' type, you could add a little more about his feelings after/during when he shot those people, y'know? and some sentences are missing some punctuation as well, but other than that, I liked it! :D

  Author's response

  Hi thanks! Well pretty much the plan was to write the basics here and let feedback govern the edit if that makes sense :)

• The Rain

  (#) tifastrife7 2008-07-28

  I really loved this stoey. What is he? He's really torn between good v. evil. He's an outsider, yet he can't resist doing the right thing. I love it. And I'm resisting reading any erotica stuff right now, lol, until I've had some sleep

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