- Your story was very good and creative. The only part that bothered me was the
"I am my Father's daughter.He is his Mother's son." That got really annoying, but i can see that you put it there the most to emphasis it. Very good and very realalistic to the real show.
Author's responseThank you very much! I suppose my use of repetition could get annoying, but I'm glad you enjoyed it all the same. :)
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