Lola and Pete attempt to discuss what has taken place and our heroine gets some unexpected visitors.
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-24 02:26:43 PMyou know I'm refraining from saying my current buzz word for the sake of the sanctity of your story.
Hot damn, Pete and his huff's. This was a great update. It didn't read like it was rushed, therea lot of detail and accuracy in there.
I can't wait to see where you take it.
Nice one! get in!
Author's responseKaty not dropping the V-Bomb? I'm impressed.
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-24 02:39:44 PMhahahahahaha. omigod. her brother knows she naked. that sucks. that was hilarious! i laughed out loud and my sister was in here and she gave me that look that said quite plainly "i always knew she was crazy..." hehe. but yes, that was good, please update asap
Author's responseEvery brother and sister has had that awkward experience of having walked in on the other's naked time...and then have to sit across from each other at the dinner table.
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-24 02:45:41 PMhmm...i don't see how you stole or used anything.
anyway, i like this chapter. no, i'm not just saying that, because, well, i'm a bitch and if i didn't like it i would probably...bitch.
i love the fact that she's not just giving into pete because he's pete. i love that she is standing her ground. oh, and i pretty much love max's character. he's so funny.
loved andy walking in on her. now i'm just anxiously waiting on Joe's reaction.
patrick: "it's like, in Chicago, my family has been there for like, six generations or something."
Adam Corola: "is there a business you didn't get into?"
patrick: "i was suppose to get into cars, but i know nothing. i'm kind of a disappointment,"
Adam: "does your dad own a shop or something?"
Patrick: "No...ugh, my grandpa and my uncle own like a body shop and my grandpa was the car guy at Allstate, i dunno,"
sorry that sucked. i'm trying to keep it PG
Author's responseHA! I just listened to that loveline. There's some creepy people who call in. It's like, just shell out the money and go see a therapist, leave Adam, Dr. Drew, and 1/2 of FOB alone.
OK, like I said, stealing is the wrong word. I was "inspired" by Joe walking in on P&G doing the nasty.
(#) howshesews 2006-11-24 03:12:39 PMOkay. in regular 'howshesews' fashion, i'm doing this in a list-form. because that's the only way i can tell you all of the parts i loved while simultaneously letting you think i'm insane.
uno) "..We've done this before," He beamed widely before adding "A lot." -hahahaha. pete wentz is such a horndog. or, at least, i think he would be. (oh, god. i can't beleive i just said horndog.)
dos) "..I'm sorry. I think I just had a seizure or something. What did you just say?" - cuh-rack me up. seriously. max is the comic relief for a situation that could possibly force lola to set pete on fire. good choice here. funny, funny.
thres) "You little floozy. How did this happen?"-i love the wrod floozy. so i had to comment on how much i love the fact that you used it. makes my perverted littl heart smile.
quatro) "...he was the one banging that troll?" -okay. when my sister and i were little, my parents told her she looked like a troll doll, so upon reading this line, i laughed so hard i couldn't breathe. thank you for this precious moment of nostalgia.
cinco)".. Batman? I'm fucking a 12 year old." -HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. that's all i have to say about that. HAHAHAHAHAHA.
seis(?))".. I'm pretty sure Andy got a good look at my kidneys." - i'm so glad you called them kidneys.
all in all, fabulous. i'm glad this story...exists. it only further feeds my obsession with the DoJ. i'm so glad it's around.
too bad, i'm like, the last one to review. good greif. i suck.
Author's responseI heart your little lists of joy and insanity. Floozy is such an underrated and underused word, if you ask me. I am so over words like slut, whore, hoebag, disease-infested prostitute, and hooker. I'm bringing floozy back. Cue Justin Timberlake music
(#) poisonedhalo 2006-11-25 04:01:13 AMOMFG funy funy funy!!!!!!
hahaha keep writing coz im literally siting here laughing n ppl think ive lost it but i couldnt care less coz im lovin this fic
Author's responseWhat did I tell you about signing up, woman?!?! Just kidding, thanks for reviewing.
But seriously, join our demented little family.
- It is sickening as to how late this review is, but here it goes! You still got me hooked girl! Also the line "Perhaps he'll freeze to death." reminded me of the Old Woman who swallowed a fly, perhaps she'll die. Yeah, I'm going on four hours of sleep right now, so these reviews are only going to get better.