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When we met

by meryl06 3 Reviews

IM NOT TELLING READ!! I DONT OWN HP!!!

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Characters: Harry, Other - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/11/24 - Updated: 2006/11/24 - 326 words

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  • When we met

    (#) Gibby 2006-11-24 04:06:24 PM

    It's an ok start. But what you really need is to make the chapters longer. Anyway good luck.

    -Gibby
  • When we met

    (#) vaiwandil 2007-10-09 02:35:17 PM

    really, that wasn't a bad start... why did you stop? would help though if you made paragraphs and such ... hoping to see it continued :)

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