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When we met
3 ReviewsIM NOT TELLING READ!! I DONT OWN HP!!!
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When we met
(#) Gibby 2006-11-24 04:06:24 PM
It's an ok start. But what you really need is to make the chapters longer. Anyway good luck.
-Gibby -
When we met
(#) vaiwandil 2007-10-09 02:35:17 PM
really, that wasn't a bad start... why did you stop? would help though if you made paragraphs and such ... hoping to see it continued :)