Two sisters, no secrets between them: or so the younger one thought. Once she learns her older sister's secret, things spin out of control. Their lives are in danger, but can anyone save them?
(#) Rab 2006-11-24
Still pretty interesting. I'd add a little more detail on some parts though if I were you. It's still good though as it is.
I skipped out on the details for a reason. On fp too many people were bitching about how they wanted things left up to their imagination, so that's what I did.
(#) GR21 2006-12-04
i like it. It is a little more fast paced then your other stories but otherwise i think you should add more i cant wait
wow... i liked it, even though it was a bit different to your normal style it was pretty good... what am i saying? AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
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