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chapter 2

by The_Wingless_Raven 3 Reviews

Two sisters, no secrets between them: or so the younger one thought. Once she learns her older sister's secret, things spin out of control. Their lives are in danger, but can anyone save them?

Category: Sci-Fi - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Sci-fi - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006/11/24 - Updated: 2006/11/25 - 1708 words


  • Project Innocence

    (#) Rab 2006-11-24 09:46:26 PM

    Still pretty interesting. I'd add a little more detail on some parts though if I were you. It's still good though as it is.

    Author's response

    I skipped out on the details for a reason. On fp too many people were bitching about how they wanted things left up to their imagination, so that's what I did.
  • Project Innocence

    (#) GR21 2006-12-04 08:24:03 PM

    i like it. It is a little more fast paced then your other stories but otherwise i think you should add more i cant wait
  • Project Innocence

    (#) water_dragon 2006-12-05 05:19:05 PM

    wow... i liked it, even though it was a bit different to your normal style it was pretty good... what am i saying? AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

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