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I'm Not

by The_Wingless_Raven 3 Reviews

Everything I'm not, and what gets me through this hell I have to call life

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/24 - Updated: 2006/11/25 - 219 words - Complete


  • I'm Not

    (#) Lines 2006-11-26 08:51:44 PM

    This starts off well, and I like the end, but somewhere around the middle it gets a little 'eh'. But I still like it :3

    Author's response

    Remember, that's ow I felt at the time, so the "eh" in the middle is how I felt. But thank you Light, you actually read and reviewed something you said you wouldn't lol.
  • I'm Not

    (#) GR21 2006-12-04 08:06:27 PM

    i think the saying don't judge a book by its cover works here. i dont know anyone that is perfect and if they were i'd punch them in the face. these stories describe my life so well
  • I'm Not

    (#) KarmasMessenger 2006-12-07 03:15:25 PM

    I am guessing by your delusional self-importance that you are most likely a teenager. You have a very egocentric attitude and are in constant need of attention in whatever manner you can receive it. Unfortunately, this shows in your writing. You may grow to become a good writer, but for now, you are stunted by your own arrogance. You have much to learn, yet I do not think you believe this to be so. Hence, you are inhibiting yourself as a writer.
    Perhaps in a few years you will grow from this phase and actually improve. For now, unfortunately, your stories and poetry come across as very cliché. You, I am sure, see them as the most unique pieces in the world, which is a shame. They are banal and lifeless. In the future, I hope you are able to see past your own perceived greatness enough to create something original. For now, your stories are the same cookie-cutter teenage angst filled emo that every other low self-esteem driven teenager regurgitates and posts, believing it to be a true masterpiece.
    Well, maybe in time you will outgrow this juvenile stage.

    I would love to read your response to this so that my point is proven beyond any doubt.

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