The Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, Harry debates Dumbledore and has to deal with James and Sirius. Meanwhile,...
- Well, that was as good as usual, though i am a bit surprised we didn't get to hear of lily's letter from the founder, and that harry hasn't invited sirius, remus, and co... yet.
Author's responseThe letters only go to adults, so the 7th years (and oldest 6th years) plus Hagrid and Flitwick would have gotten them at Hogwarts. Remus' parents and Ellen's father would have gotten them, too.
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2006-11-26 11:54:06 AMAnother good chapter. I see that you are focusing on the diary as a center point for Voldemort and his defeat in this, and you're making Harry more of a friend to Lily than James and Sirius which is an interesting twist. I'm curious how many years you plan to cover in this book. Additionally, I am also curious on whether you intend to go through with the anamagus transformations in it as well. Please update soon.
- OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! When you say 17 chapters are you gonna finish it in 17 chapters? Are you planning to do a sequel to any of your stories? I can't wait for the next chapter. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
- I'm continuing to enjoy this story, quite refreshing to see Harry amidst a different set of contemporaries. Plus I think you've done some (more) original thinking with the political wrangling in this one; the point of the Ministry and Voldemort sharing a common goal, the unspeakables, the meritocracy league, the home protection companies (a bit like Muggles at Bay, that), etc.
So Lily is 'like a sister' to Harry, thus putting the kibosh on his pursuing her romantically? Okay.
(Couldn't help but wince when I heard those words, thinking of my favourite coupling, H/Hr, and how that same deadly pronouncement has been used time and time again in various fanfics)
(#) artiel8857 2006-11-27 04:34:04 PMLove the story.
It's quite refreshing how often you update in comparison to writers like rosswrock (last update 02-08-05) and viridian who update their great stories once every couple of months.
In addition, I like this story even more then some of your other works I've read becuse I'm not the biggest H/Hr shipper and that's not an option in this great, original, twist on time travel.
- Harry is right about the Ministry. If they are so stupid as to devote most of their energies into investigating 'The Order' and harassing the average wizard instead of attacking the Death Eaters, then they'll reap what they sow. Even if Dumbledore doesn't like it.
Hoping that Britain will be back to normal after Voldemort is defeated, Dumbledore got another thing coming. Harry is going to make the magical better.
So the Marauders have started early. :D