The boys are back and there's a party thrown in their honor. Lola has a heart to heart with someone she didn't expect.
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-26 01:38:42 PMaw. all the ficwad girls, lets get loiusville sluggers and go after the couple that broke Lola's heart! hehe. man. i am way into this story. i'm getting all pissy and want to punch someone... :)
Author's responseHa! Leave Jeanae alone...I'm sure she's quite nice in real life.
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-26 04:00:36 PMi love the brother/sister bonding between joe and lola. the whole ambiance thing...well, i lust after it. thank you for satisfying me on that level.
"What have you been up to?" /Was that a trick question?/haha. i shat myself a little bit. up to this point, alex is the only one who has been able to extract feces from me with her words. so kudos to you.
the stun gun warning was completely appropriate. pete is a douchebag, he knew she'd be there. but gah, patrick...always the good guy. and i love him for it.
i love the realization she came to at the end. the epiphany was perfect.
i pretty much can't say enough good things about your writing, and you pretty much know i'm in love with this story. but i feel like i owe you one of these:
Author's responsemmmblowjobs....I mean, thank you :) Now I rival Alex in the excretion department...is that good? I'm going to assume it's good. E
(#) poisonedhalo 2006-11-27 03:20:37 AMi cant believe he did that?? arrr PETE can i just smack u??? ARRRRR
sory outbursting rite there...
i cant wait 2 c wat hapens next...will she confront pete? will pete quit being a drama queen? will patrick tell andy and joe? haha i sound like a bad "to be continued" thing hahaha
k so update soon
Author's responseThere will be much confrontation in the future. I think I might let it simmer for a few chapters...who knows. Thanks for reviewing...and for the last time, SIGN UP, DAMN YOU! Everyone's very nice, I swear. :)
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-27 11:54:23 PMPatrick needs to stop being so damn nice. He's totally pimping off all of Pete's birds. I kinda like it.
I love the underdog.
Again another great chapter, I wish I was as good as the other DoJ girls for leaving long ass reviews but I'm just so out of it at the moment.
Author's responseSeriously, Patrick is scoring all the ladies around here. And at least you reviewed, that's all that matters.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-30 07:44:15 AMMan. You've got some talent, woman. Dude.
Your idiom is wonderful, the whole thing just flows. It MELTS in the mouth. Or head? Well, take all of that as a compliment. Along with the rating point. Welcome to my fav authors' list.
Thanks for being in the DoJ. :)
Author's responseEven when you aren't making any sense, I still take it as a compliment. And I must applaud how you reviewed for every chapter. You, Alex, are the shit.
(#) luckysgc921 2006-12-06 10:44:55 AMlove love love this so far. I have this incredible loathing for everything Wentz (except...his lyrics..damnit) so I do adore it when he is portrayed as I believe he is--selfloving and immature. Patrick being the insightful confidant at the end is very realistic too, he seems like the type of person you could spill your guts to anytime.
Author's responseI want to believe he's really not that bad...really I do. But sometimes, he makes it soooo hard. Thanks for the review, I'm surprised you even found this story. It's buried on page 3824820984028409824904820948209843247510. Actually, you can just click my name and view it in my profile, so I'm not that surprised, but I'm still quite thankful. Gah, my rambling...