- What a great chapter, Snape is a fool, the only reason Harry break every rule in the book, is because, 1) he doesn't have no other couse at the time, and 2) when he does have time, no-one will listen to him. And the reason that Harry is lacking in magical knowledge... is because Albus did pepare him, when he knew that Harry would one day face Voldemort. So if anyone is in falut with Harry isn't ready, its Albus. I truly hope Harry does find out what Albus has done to him...
(#) selenepotter 2006-11-25Good story!
It would be more interesting if the staf set him up with a girl from each house.
Author's responseAs you are going to read further (the next X-chapters), there is a reason why he chose Hermione and Ginny. Getting the connection with the two girls, is a very delicate process, and that would only work when the girls are already close to him, at least one of the girls.
In my Yahoo group you can read the first 120,000 words chapters (unedited) if you want to read.
(#) IAmTheMetatron1946 2018-03-16Look, not to be rude or anything but I read 1 paragraph spotted a SPELLING ERROR and turned back. If you can't be bothered to spell even the basics properly, why bother? Get yourself a competent beta and if you already have a beta, for Merlin's sake FIRE THEM because they are doing you NO favours.
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