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Douse the Light

by aznfoblover 4 Reviews

Pete's a wreck since his girlfriend is gone. (one shot)

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/28 - Updated: 2006/11/29 - 873 words - Complete

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  • Douse the Light

    (#) rawrlittledino 2006-11-28 11:31:50 PM

    That was amazing.
    It actually makes my one-shots look like dirt. Like, seriously.
    You can really picture his emotions, and it really gets you in depth with the story without explaining a lot. Well done. Uses rating point =]

    Author's response

    Thank you for such a great comment. I really didn't think that this was very good, it was just because I was feeling like crap one day after school. You have made my day happier. :)
  • Douse the Light

    (#) xImRadx 2006-12-11 12:40:02 PM

    Holy...Shit...

    That was Truly moving. It changed so much. At first I thought they had only broken up. Then when I found out she died (Shocker number one) I thought she was ill. Then It turned around again and you find out she killed herself. (Shocker number two) I was like Wait what!?

    It was a very well written story, I could really feel the saddness of Pete and everyone else. You created the mood perfectly...

    -Rates her story as moving-

    Keep writting, your talented I've read another one of your storys before, and I havent been let down yet.

    Author's response

    i think you're like the nicest person in the world. my writing is total crap. but thank you anyway :) you made my day
  • Douse the Light

    (#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-01-11 12:32:42 PM

    there are actual tears in my eyes :[
    ---->rating point!
    awww poor poor pete :(

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