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Douse the Light
4 ReviewsPete's a wreck since his girlfriend is gone. (one shot)
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Douse the Light
(#) rawrlittledino 2006-11-28 11:31:50 PM
That was amazing.
It actually makes my one-shots look like dirt. Like, seriously.
You can really picture his emotions, and it really gets you in depth with the story without explaining a lot. Well done. Uses rating point =]Author's response
Thank you for such a great comment. I really didn't think that this was very good, it was just because I was feeling like crap one day after school. You have made my day happier. :) -
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(#) poisonedhalo 2006-11-29 02:25:25 AM
OMFG i was crying...its so sad ...good work ..nawww so damn sad tho -
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(#) xImRadx 2006-12-11 12:40:02 PM
Holy...Shit...
That was Truly moving. It changed so much. At first I thought they had only broken up. Then when I found out she died (Shocker number one) I thought she was ill. Then It turned around again and you find out she killed herself. (Shocker number two) I was like Wait what!?
It was a very well written story, I could really feel the saddness of Pete and everyone else. You created the mood perfectly...
-Rates her story as moving-
Keep writting, your talented I've read another one of your storys before, and I havent been let down yet.Author's response
i think you're like the nicest person in the world. my writing is total crap. but thank you anyway :) you made my day -
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(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-01-11 12:32:42 PM
there are actual tears in my eyes :[
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awww poor poor pete :(