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• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Dragen 2006-11-29

  What another great chapter; so Harold and Mary seem are going to help Harry taking down the dark side of the wizarding world.
  
  Now thinking about it, I think that Ellen, might be Harry life-mate in this story.
  
  I can’t wait to see what happens next. So until next time, keep up the great work and update soon.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-29

  So Ellen's already got her eye on Harry? I s'pose you can't really blame her. He's a far cry from the average eleven-year-old.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-11-29

  Liked the hex Lily threatened James with.
  
  I'm really liking this fic; I like the characters you've created, and I like the way Harry's behaving.
  
  Does he have any ideas about romance? Or just let it come (as long as it's not Lily). Will he be considering which children in the future might not get born if he screws up their parents' chance of getting married?
  
  Thanks for writing this.
  
  Tom A.

  Author's response

  Yes, he would be worried about messing up anyone's lovelife, unless he knew they hadn't had one.
  
  "T"

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) BJH 2006-11-29

  Nice chapter, I liked how James's enthusiasm gets him in trouble. Lily had him pegged, he doesn't know when he has gone too far until he already has.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Skoell 2006-11-29

  great chapter! again can't rate any more good stuff...
  
  nutella?!? o_0

  Author's response

  A chocolate-hazelnut spread.
  
  "T"

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Toto 2006-11-29

  So it's Ellen/Harry, uh?
  You didn't say who was the last person who resigned, just that one did. Fudge?

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) banner 2006-11-29

  About the jailbreak - where is Barty Crouch, Jr?
  Is Harry even interested in any of these little girls? He's thirty, after all. He's been a soldier and a hero and an icon and "delusional and attention-seeking" and the list goes on and on. I'm not sure that a sheltered girl who is barely adolescent would be attractive in any way.
  In fact, I wonder if he feels like a pervert?

  Author's response

  Crouch Junior is about 8. Harry is not thinking of the girls sexually, but his body has 12 year old reactions and interests. He'll discuss it with Mrs. Potter over the summer.
  
  "T"

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Jimm 2006-11-29

  Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Shaggy37 2006-11-29

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! AWESOME!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Does this mean that Harry and Ellen are gonna get together eventually? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Dassadec 2006-11-29

  This has an interesting premise which has led into a good story. Keep up the good work, please.

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