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I Grip The Rails

I changed it a bit. To me it seems more like a chanting to me, still. But I do like it alot and hope you do too.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/30 - Updated: 2006/12/01 - 170 words - Complete

Reviews

• I Grip The Rails

  (#) xXxMetalHeadxXx 2006-11-30 10:41:31 PM

  that was very wonderful.
  i dont kno how else to describe it.
  it was just so.....good. haunting! that is what i wanted to day! haunting! your poem was haunting

  Author's response

  thank you soooo much for the review :D

• I Grip The Rails

  (#) xXxMetalHeadxXx 2006-11-30 10:42:31 PM

  *say
  
  sorry for the typo

• I Grip The Rails

  (#) WynonaKing90 2006-11-30 11:39:12 PM

  i know it is supposed to be chanting, but it is a little too repetitive. Although, your words are amazing. they really make me feel.

  Author's response

  repetitive, as in the:'i grip the rails' part?
  you think it should be shorter... or?

• I Grip The Rails

  (#) lizards_love 2006-12-06 09:25:41 AM

  Wow! i loved this! it was apsolute perfection! so original! will you write me one about love and death? sorry to ask, but yours are so good!

• I Grip The Rails

  (#) jackskellington 2008-03-27 07:36:17 AM

  i thought it was gonna start scary because of the first line, but then as i continued reading it...WOW

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