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Lend (Journey)

by Rous 1 Reviews

LOTR based poem. A love song written by a character in my story.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/12/01 - Updated: 2006/12/01 - 130 words - Complete

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  • Lend (Journey)

    (#) pinkfroggie06 2007-02-24 06:51:29 PM

    Yeah. In all of the paragraphs or stanzas whatever the hell you call them. I just wanted to let you know that the entire poem was UNEXCEPTIONAL! So it basically fucking sucked. Asshole deal with a stapler. I walk alone, assmunch.

    Author's response

    Thank you for your assessment, unintelligible and unqualified as it is. It is always good to receive feedback, even if it is indecipherable. I can deal with unexceptional. What I have a problem with is your colourful language, which shows an appalling lack of imagination. I guess it just goes to show that those who cannot spell and write, resort to the sewer.

    In the future, I suggest you be a bit more circumspect in your choice of wording; anyone reading this will get the idea you are an idiot. I would not like to have that on my conscience. I would spare you the stigma of carrying that around for the rest of your life. Just a heads up for you. And, what exactly would dealing with a stapler get me? You walk alone? I understand you write alone, your grammar shows that. And, an assmunch; sounds like you could use some imagination pointers, also. By the way, revenge rating makes you look the fool, not me. Repaying honesty with unthought-out comments can only earn you more of what you have already gotten: lack of respect.

    Well wishes in your future. You need them.

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