(#) water_dragon 2006-12-02delightfully gripping, you have introduced me into the world of yu-gi-oh and i'm still trying to understand it but this is very good
Author's responseHaven't you ever watched it on TV? Dude, it's awesome! Though I admit there are parts that keep repeating and you just want to kick a couple of the characters in the balls to make them stop saying the same damn thing over and over again. Like Yami and Yugi's speaches about "The heart of the cards" gets really old really fast. Other than that, I've been a Yu-Gi-Oh! fangirl for about ten years now. Not planning on quiting it anytime soon!
- I like casteshipping, so of course I enjoyed this story! I'd like to see more of this, especially more of an explanation of why Atem hates his life as Pharaoh. (Like: does he hate being Pharaoh because he fell for Bakura, or did he fall for Bakura because he already hated life at the palace for some reason?) Not that it matters, really, but I'm curious. I'd also just like to see more of Atem & Bakura together, either in the past or the present. ^_^
Author's responseI already wrote the next two chapters for this fic, and they help explain things a little better. Of course, they can't just go and explain everything, that'd ruin what I'm trying to do with this story.
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