All that was heard was a gun shot...one shot. A poem, written by me, sorry to poetry haters out there! *puts on helmet so doesn't get beaten up*
(#) panda_1418 2006-12-02 08:31:43 PM
And all that was heard from all around, was a simple gun shot. I like how you began and ended it was the same thing. It was really moving, and I loved it. So going in favourites.
(#) vaiwandil 2006-12-03 01:45:52 AM
well, pity for the poetry-haters .. they are really missing something! very well done.
I was all so happy to see that another story of yours was there! and I still am (; we are all bit harsh on Emmet at the moment, don't you think? :D
(#) Trinda 2006-12-03 12:38:42 PM
Frigg! I hate you for your poetry talents! (Not really, I love you for it but this is my way of saying I'm jelous of your talents once again)
I loved the story, though to be honest, I didn't like how the ending was so rushed, I wish you would of gotten Delilah more mad at him and maybe punched him or something. But like panda said, I love how you begun and ended with that line
(#) Delilah89 2006-12-05 03:47:28 PM
Cries That is so sad!!!and totally romantic!!!cries some more
cool. a bit confusing but thought prevocing I guess. An interesting layout handy that you explained the poem thingy. Weird that I read this one right after the other dehilila/julius death story you have. good writing though. :D