Problems arise in the mall for Monica, Ray and Gerard
Hey your on a fucking role tonight! It fucking rocked as usual! Can't wait for more!
Thanks so much. I just watched the video of Gerard on stage with the monitor again and well its inspirational!!!
WOO! awesome chapter, keep up the good work
Some more great chapters!
I really want to find out what happens next!
Please update soon this is a great story.. Cant wait to find out who the persone that spun Monica around... DUm Dum Dum Dum
uh oh!!!! mini cliffhanger!
This chapter made me laugh.
Who? Who grabbed her damn it? lol
Sorry I really love your story it's awesome, keep the great chapters coming.
AHH the suspense! write more soon or ill go balistic if i dont know...lol
fabulous as always though
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