Problems arise in the mall for Monica, Ray and Gerard
Hey your on a fucking role tonight! It fucking rocked as usual! Can't wait for more!
Thanks so much. I just watched the video of Gerard on stage with the monitor again and well its inspirational!!!
(#) dustyhalo 2006-12-09 11:12:26 PM
WOO! awesome chapter, keep up the good work
Some more great chapters!
I really want to find out what happens next!
(#) xXxVIKKYxXx 2006-12-10 07:34:50 AM
Please update soon this is a great story.. Cant wait to find out who the persone that spun Monica around... DUm Dum Dum Dum
(#) sing4me09 2006-12-10 08:18:32 AM
uh oh!!!! mini cliffhanger!
(#) Silvana 2006-12-10 12:40:03 PM
This chapter made me laugh.
Who? Who grabbed her damn it? lol
Sorry I really love your story it's awesome, keep the great chapters coming.
AHH the suspense! write more soon or ill go balistic if i dont know...lol
fabulous as always though