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• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) moocow 2006-12-13

  THEY HAD SECKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!
  
  :]
  
  made me moo, you dirty pant-ruiner.
  you owe me.
  these were my favorite

  Author's response

  Woopsie, sorry. I forgot the warning at the beginning :)

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-13

  i'm a little sceered. ah. suspense. update soon!

  Author's response

  I shall try. Thanks for the review.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-13

  a little bit of hatrack and coco sex. nice...
  
  anwyay. before i elaborate on any of those thoughts i want to say I MISS YOU CECE! you are never on AIM anymore. that's prolly 'cause you're too busy creating your next masterpiece, but still...DoJ Huggage
  
  "You'll thank me in the morning," Patrick said trying to support all of Pete's weight. "Your mom will thank me in the morning," Pete grumbled. i don't know why, but i laughed really hard at that.
  
  you are amazing, nice spice. keep up the good work and take a rating point, too.

  Author's response

  CRYSTAL! I MISS YOU TOO! I've been on my death bed the past couple of days, so I used up as little energy as possible, so I haven't been on-line. I don't have a life...I promise. DoJ Huggage Back
  
  I'm so happy that you enjoyed the "your mom" comeback. That's the only comeback that I have because I am the biggest nerd that you will ever know...trust me. Sad thing is, I laugh at my own your mom jokes all the time and all of my friends just roll their eyes at me, but I just can't get enough of them. They are too funny!
  
  Thanks for the rating point and the encouragement. You are still my number one cheerleader. I hope to talk to you soon!!!
  
  HEY! Update soon, so I can give you some of these rating points back! They are burnin' a hole in my pocket.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) duckapple 2006-12-13

  "Your mom will thank me in the morning," Pete grumbled. - Best Pete Line Ever.
  
  Babies.
  No longer a question, it is no required.

  Author's response

  Babies??? Of course. As long as they are all boys....I'm not having girls.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) MMMramen 2006-12-13

  Yay! An update from CeCe! OK, this is further proof of how dorky I am: I'm so scared for Collette. Kiefer found her, I just know it. When Patrick got the first call and no one was there and he said her name...BOOM. He knows. But I know you won't let anything happen to CoCo...right? Anyway, Pete is just so adorable with Jackson. He's a little kid at heart. "Your mom will thank me in the morning," Pete grumbled. HA! That was great. I laughed quite hard. CoCo and Patty-Cakes finally made the lovings, which was tastefully done. It's about time, if you ask me. I'd jump that kid as soon as he said hello. My last rating point of the week went to you...and I rated your story as HOT. Boo and yah!

  Author's response

  I find it quite humorous that all the DoJ girls pointed out the "your mom" come back. I knew I fit in with you guys for some reason unknown to man.
  
  Thanks for th Boo and Yah! and the rating point of course. I'm trying to catch up on all my shit, and you will be seeing many many many reviews on your story from yours truly...I PROMISE!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14

  Pete definitely ascended on my list of cool people because of his sweet ways with Jackson. I doubt he’s ever gonna beat the Stump, the DoJz and Waldorf and Statler of the Muppet Show though.
  
  Moaning Patrick… I’m not even at the sex scene and I’m excited beyond R-ratings.
  
  o
  
  o
  
  o
  
  (That’s drool right there…)
  
  Ha ha, the first thing she says after she DID PATRICK STUMP is “So, dinner?”. ;) You’re awesomely DoJ-y, Nice Spice. :)
  
  I’m digging the new familiarity between CoCo and the Biscuit (car scene after sex). It makes me smile on the inside. (Should I go see a doctor?)
  
  CoCo should talk to Jackson about reading a goddamn book for a change. Video games are baaaaaaad. ;)
  
  Oh. My. Hatrack. Who called? Evil man? I am scared.
  
  "Your mom will thank me in the morning," Pete grumbled. -> I’m too much a DoJ girl to let that slip by without comment: MWAHAHAHA. Pete’s pretty… obscene. ;)
  
  Thanks be to the nature of language in general for being ambiguous. This way I can rate this story as “exciting” because of the sex AND because of the scary phone call and I wonder what will happen next. Nifty, eh?

  Author's response

  You are right....Video games are baaaaaad. I will have to give that kid some books. What was I thinking???
  
  I didn't mean to make you drool quite so much. I had to wipe off my compter screen.
  
  I don't think you need to see a doctor quite yet. When the smiling starts to become apparent on the outside, then you should get to the ER ASAP.
  
  I'm glad you like the "your mom" come back. It's one of my own and the only one I have. I'm a nerd, but a nice nerd.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-12-15

  OK, gathers herself Ok.....ahem....Ok.....coughs....wooh! So er...fans herself down Is it hot in here or is it just me? gulps down a pint of water
  
  Oh happy day! I only read this now, I think there was a reason for this, because, I had to be at home and not at work when I was reading it....yeah.....
  
  The Biscuit is damn well written in this. Collette is likeable, I want her to have a flaw though, I like her too much. ( Like Alex says, make them human, that's so true...) am I gabbering on yes. Ok....fans herself down again
  
  Sweet MOther of greatest hits of Al Green everrrr...

  Author's response

  Collette has flaws...you just haven't noticed them yet. No one is perfect, of course.
  
  Thanks for the wonderful review. It made me smile :)

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