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All the King's Horses

Harry versus Snape - do you need anything else?

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Characters: Bill Weasley, Harry, Justin, Snape, Other - Warnings: [!!] [?] [V] - Published: 2006/12/13 - Updated: 2006/12/14 - 6841 words - Complete

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  (#) Cateagle 2006-12-13 10:50:04 PM

  Hmm, sounds like Harry kinda "lost the bubble" there, but it would be difficult to blame him under the circumstances.

  Author's response

  Well he was about due for some post traumatic stress. He has killed 6 people and 100+ dementors recently.~Jim

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  (#) johnapple 2006-12-13 11:07:34 PM

  Your delivery was fine. Good to see the greesy haired bast--d gone.
  Great writing. Thank you.

  Author's response

  Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.~Jim

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  (#) Shaggy37 2006-12-13 11:42:57 PM

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! You really are BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. This story rules. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

  Author's response

  Thanks. I had a good deal of help with the chapter from those listed in the acknowledgements.~Jim

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  (#) Binny 2006-12-14 02:00:56 AM

  Oh Mah Gawsh. Excellently done. Truly. This was AWESOME. I have to say - "Let me show you how to clear your mind" and what happened when he said it has to be one of the greatest lines in fanfiction - ever.

  Author's response

  And here I was hoping you would pick Hack's ending lines in Chapter 13 of Bungle. Glad you liked it.~Jim

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  (#) JVTazz 2006-12-14 03:35:43 AM

  nice chapter :)

  Author's response

  Thanks. It took much longer than normal, but I think it was worth it.~Jim

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  (#) banner 2006-12-14 08:15:23 AM

  Marvellous Kill Snape scene! I love it love it love it!
  Thanks - I needed that.

  Author's response

  Happy to oblige.~Jim

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-14 09:35:17 AM

  The duel didn't disappoint in the least. Snape was impressive and Harry was exhausted, but it all worked out in a manner that I can easily accept as realistic.
  
  Susan's conversation with Hannah was pretty well done as well. If Harry can forgive Ginny (to an extent), then I suppose Susan can forgive Hannah (also to an extent).
  
  I'm not sure why, but I want to see Bill and Harry have a conversation in the next chapter, and I'd also like to see Peter Abbott make an appearance. Ah...if only Harry had managed to get him to agree to a duel.

  Author's response

  I wanted Snape to be a worthy opponent. I hoped Susan and Hannah came off as believeable. Bill and Harry will probably have some kind of conversation, though you have to wonder how much talking Harry is capable of right now.~Jim

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  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2006-12-14 03:18:54 PM

  OK, I have to say this, now. You more than made up for killing Fleur. That was absolutely awesome. Please update soon.

  Author's response

  Thanks. Sorry about Fleur, well actually no not really.~Jim

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  (#) JustAReader 2006-12-15 12:57:03 PM

  I just found this story yesterday, it's great! You have done a wonderful job developing the charecters making them seem real and believable. I also enjoy some of your unique views of the potterverse. please continue to write more.

  Author's response

  Thanks. I am starting on ch 29 today.~Jim

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  (#) nfosurfer 2007-01-07 02:56:35 AM

  Love the snape scene. can see harry doing the same in cannon.... and yes I am the same nfosurfer from FFN.LOVED It!

  Author's response

  Well thanks for reviewing here as well.~Jim

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