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• The Mistake

  (#) jessiearei 2006-12-14

  whoa!!
  your story's pretty much amazing!! haha.
  you should totally update soon!!
  i love it!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much! I've already put up the next chapter... I hope you like it just as much.

• The Mistake

  (#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-14

  um wow. intense. cant wait for more so update soon k? that was kinda sad. that would suck so bad to have that happen at a concert. at the fob concert i went too someone got knocked out and couldnt remember anything. i was like awwww sucks to be you. lol. update soon!

  Author's response

  It won't stay so sad for long... I can't immagine not remembering an entire concert... that really WOULD suck!

• The Mistake

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14

  I think this is pretty awesome. That's what I think. :)
  
  This one's going on my alerts.
  
  I very much like how you expressed Ava's infatuation with Patrick; mentioned her day dreams and all. We all have them, ya know. ;)

  Author's response

  Wow, I'm on someone's alerts! I feel so honored! :)

• The Mistake

  (#) MMMramen 2006-12-17

  WENDY NOOOO! I'm scared...on to the next chapter.

• The Mistake

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-12-17

  panting in excitement right now
  
  Be rated you!

  Author's response

  Don't we all

• The Mistake

  (#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2006-12-26

  jasus... drama hu doesnt luv it?

• The Mistake

  (#) CoraLiz 2007-01-15

  Oh what will happen next?

• The Mistake

  (#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-11

  so yes, i'm backtracking and reading your story again and noticed that i dind't review - i am both shocked an appalled at myself.
  lol to be honest it's totally Blink182's fault, they came up in my iTunes and i was like, i'm going to go read Gwen's story again.
  Amazing job, i had forgotten how compelling these first chapters were.
  And i totally had those same fantasies Ava was having during thier intermission, which made me smile.
  hopefully i'm not to late to give you points.
  xxo.

  Author's response

  I am appalled as well! How DARE you not review my story!!! Geez!!! But it's totally ok. I do that all the time- forget to review after I read. But I truly appreciate the reviews. And Blink 182, but that's another story... because, you know, I heart them so much. Ava's fantasies were quite fun, I would probably have them should I ever get the money to attend a FOB show. ;)

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