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Cloak and Dagger
(#) Tawney 2006-12-20
OMG....he killed her?! Arg it was just getting to a major bit and you leave me here waiting! Great chapter though! XXAuthor's response
Sorry to leave you waiting, but I have to buy presents for my brothers or else they will drop me in the snow, bound and gaged. They are bigger then me...they totally have that power.
Thanks for all the reviews. I'm glad you found this story!Cloak and Dagger
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-20
What an outragously good update CeCe, this was truly gripping, I couldn't stop reading it! The dialogue was brilliant, the sense of time and the ambiance was just perfect and I felt I was there witnessing the whole thing.
The interaction with Jackson is so detailed and realistic but who'd be better at it than you! You really bring it to life but you keep it real, this sort of thing does happen to people and it's so believable. You are so incredible.
Have a great holiday my sweets.
xxxxAuthor's response
I'm trying my hardest to keep this as real to life as possible. You are such a great reviewer. Your reviews make we want to say 'fuck work' and stay at home and write more. Unfortunately I've been blessed with having a conscious and rationality, so that's not gonna happen, but if I wasn't I'd be at my computer 24/7...scary much?
Happy Holidays to you as well.
Smooches!Cloak and Dagger
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-20
aw. poor jackson. and poor pete. this is really good, cant wait for more.Author's response
It wouldn't be drama if there wasn't a point where you wanted to say 'poor everyone,' right? Thanks for the review!Cloak and Dagger
(#) MMMramen 2006-12-20
I kneeeew it! I knew Kiefer had something to do with Morgan's death. Victory is mine? Amazing chapter. Amazing, as usual. I'm tingling with anticipation. Enjoy the holidays, lovey.Author's response
Victory is totally yours! Oooo, you are actually tingling? Now that's amazing. Thanks for the wonderful review and of course the (ps) rating point. You have yourself a good holidays too!Cloak and Dagger
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-21
Jackson landing on Patrick’s stomach reminds me of YOU CALLING THE BISCUIT FAT! On the DoJ website. NOT nice. NOT NICE AT ALL!!! ;)
Kudos to Patrick for not jumping at CoCo with her smooth curves… Actually, I think that was pretty dumb, Biscuit…
HA HACloak and Dagger
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-21
Jackson landing on Patrick’s stomach reminds me of YOU CALLING THE BISCUIT FAT! On the DoJ website. NOT nice. NOT NICE AT ALL!!! ;)
Kudos to Patrick for not jumping at CoCo with her smooth curves… Actually, I think that was pretty dumb, Biscuit…
HA HACloak and Dagger
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-21
Jackson landing on Patrick’s stomach reminds me of YOU CALLING THE BISCUIT FAT! On the DoJ website. NOT nice. NOT NICE AT ALL!!! ;)
Kudos to Patrick for not jumping at CoCo with her smooth curves… Actually, I think that was pretty dumb, Biscuit…
HA HA. CoCo Crispies. Ok, maybe that’s just me. But I thought it was funny… :)
Ah, Pete can’t eat like a decent person. Should we be surprised?
Aw, Jackson at the drums. Adorable. Drummers are supposed to be cute and underaged. Says… the DoJ Rule Book?
HA HA. Again. “Want some help?” You’re Funny Spice today.
Oh. Oh. I bet you are dying to know that “Locke” is German for “curl”. Yeah, Collette Curl sounds really neat.
CoCo surely is protective of Jackson. I would have probably reacted in the same way though. Even without the Evil Man on our heels.
Rating point. Original this time. Yep. That’s about it.
P.S.: Happy Holidays, Nice Spice. Hope you have some drama wrapped under your tree. Well, not really… but make sure you bring some of that when you return!
(Yeah... it was my fault after all. HTML hates me. It's a mutual feeling actually.)Author's response
First of all, thanks for the wonderful review! It made me giggle and I love hearing what the German word for English names are. It gives me something new to learn.
Second: I DID NOT CALL HIM FAT! I was actually complimenting the strapping young Biscuit. Go to the DoJ website and all will be made clear.
(HTML likes no one. Don't feel bad.)Cloak and Dagger
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-01-01
i'm finding a massive problem in accurately leaving a review for anyone today. let me start by saying this was a fantastic read. what better way to start the new year? (i printed them off last night and read this chapter and the next) and i don't know why i put that in parenthesis. hmm.
anyway, you know you are amazing. take a point for it.Author's response
Thanks for the point! I find you absolutely amazing as well and I like your parenthesis.
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